Princess Celestia finds herself in a strange new world, with a strange new body. With no knowledge of this land, and no way to return home, she finds herself relying on a kind-hearted man to show her what it means to be a human.
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Well! Looks like his life has gotten a little more interesting! Lol. Awesome work and update whenever you can!
Truly the ways of life are getting within the way i would say that you could take my way out and that way is through the lovely pain of death but then you wount be able to update so stay alive and will plus dont sweat the time only the hardcore fans sitck around for the updates fuck the little pussies the quit on you if you dont update within the week!
lol when i saw royal garuds i was like shining armors in this chapter isnt he
WHAT DOSE FTW MEAN I'm dying to know
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I believe fuck the world
I really hope that Celestia will stay in the human world and the two stooges will get run over by a car or something.
Nice chapter by the way!
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For the win.
4108603 thanks Draco. :)
4107847 for the win
*cough, cough*
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4119267 Seems I was first to get that. . . .
FIRST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Congratulations, you get a cookie.
4119463 YAY!!!!!!
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I really wasn't expecting much of this story, thinking it would be like, Celestia randomly arrives and automatically falls in love with the main character or something, especially with the 'sex' tag, but I'm really enjoying it so far. Phil is far from being perfect, and he's actually someone one could easily identify themselves to (but seriously, wash your fucking dishes pls? that shit is filthy), and Celestia's personality is near perfect IMO.
There are a few mistakes here and there, but it doesn't really hinder the reading experience. And it's not like I would ever do any better, either. Except maybe the clusterfuck of dialogue only in chapter 3, which could be easily fixed by a simple "he/she/I said" after each line. I have no idea where you're taking this story, and from the looks of it, neither do you, but often when you pretty much wing a story, it ends up having more 'soul'.
...if that made any sense (and it probably didn't, goddamn I should stop commenting at 5:30am).
Anyway, keep it up, I'm really curious to see where this is going. Also you shouldn't tone down the language, unless too many shits/fucks might eventually force you to use a mature rating (which I doubt, as I remember reading a story about a pony learning the word fuck and using it all the time, and it was rated teen). Swearing is life, politeness is death.
March 27, 2014 Patch Notes
Updated chapter 3
Dialogue fix. Lines are much more clear
Minor changes to dialogue. Nothing story changing. Trivial details revealed.
Chapter 4 is going to be a chore.
Yay, we have more roommates! Oh, wait... Having important government officials in your apartment can't be good.
Fun story at least. Somepony ends up in quite a pickle
More important than us enjoying your work I hope you are at least able to find some joy in writing. It would be bad if you didn't enjoy sitting around doing what you do (even though writing can be stressful I know).
Keep up the good work
God damn it FimFiction, why you no tell me this updated?
I've been missing out on the purchasing with money line for too long!
4119267 Was thinking the same thing.
All suggestions.
Capitalize.
Gazes.
At.
“You’ve been here for a while, is everything well?”
“That’s enough, Soulfire,” commanded Celestia.
Ooh... things are getting interesting. We haven't seen the last of the detective whose name I have already forgotten, and tensions are high with Phil’s boss. Will Phil keep his job? Will there be any more surprise bunkmates? Even with his income and previous experiences providing shelter for others, will Phil be able to pay for all three of these people’s eating habits? Find out... in ten seconds because the chapter is already up!