Princess Celestia finds herself in a strange new world, with a strange new body. With no knowledge of this land, and no way to return home, she finds herself relying on a kind-hearted man to show her what it means to be a human.
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This is good, keep up the nice work.
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Awesome chapter! Let Celestia stay and send the stooges home, it will be awesome!
This was an excellent chapter and don't worry about your story compared to others. You have fans that genuinely enjoy your story. Keep in mind that if nobody dislikes your story then your doing something wrong. Keep up the good work!
Dude...one does not generally disclose to the world that they have a good chunk of porn on their computer.
I got only one thing to say so far...
(With a South Park voice)
Niccccccccccceeeeeeeeeeeeee.......
Damn, you're somehow doing everything I want to do, but don't have the skill to do it. Kick-ass computer, TF2 trading, Adventure Time, having any writing capability whatsoever. On the other hand, I've miraculously kept up with the series, so I guess that's one thing I've got.
In more story related news, this is going swell. I've come across at least three instances where I've had to move the screen just so I could stop re-reading the same hilarious line over and over. Most of them involving the guard's sexiness.
Damn, now I can't stop re-reading my last sentence about the guard's sexiness. Better stop while I'm ahead.
I do admit that this chapter is a tad bit rushed, but it's still good in my opinion!
what happen next chapter?
America in a nutshell.
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Tis a bit shortsighted in that opinion to me as I've seen how vastly different we Americans are at a person to person basis. To say something that broad offends me quite a bit. Not that I don't respect your opinion, and see myself why many say such things, but couldn't those type of things be left out of places like this? This being a place of friendship and ponies.
I don't mean to be rude or anything it is just off-putting to see this type of thing happening everywhere.
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Ehh, it was just a joke. But, sure, I'll try to limit that.
It sounds like we need a road trip at this rate.
His wallet eventually will star complaining
Yeah, Celestia's definitely out of character, but in the context of the story, she's pretty much in character.
I mean, c'mon, you're an immortal ruler with thousands of ponies looking up to you, expecting you to guide them, you're always pressured into giving a good example and shit, and all of a sudden you end up in a different dimension where no one knows you, no one expects anything from you and no one will give a shit about what you do?
She's just livin' it up.
I'm enjoying this story and the growing sexual tension (if it can even be called that) between those two. Phil should definitely take her out on a date like, going to see some kind of crazy ass R-rated movie or something.
I could totally see them going on a road trip with the two guards being obnoxious yet total bros, and they'd end up getting really drunk and doing stupid shit like skydiving or something. You're giving Celestia a I-don't-give-a-fuck yet playful attitude, and that could lead to many great things. Hell I don't know, wherever you're taking this story, I'm reading it.
Also LOL @ associating greasy foods to a country. You should see the kind of shit people eat in bars anywhere around the world... some far more 'exotic' than onion rings. But damn it, I wanna eat a big ass steak now... it's 5 A.M. and I'm actually about to go in the fridge and cook me a steak.
I have lost control of my life.
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>2014
>20 GB of porn
>"good chunk"
Do you even fap?
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No. And if I did, I would not disclose it to ruffians like you.
Do you mean shooting darts and playing pool?
He should take them to. Theme park.
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