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Something must be wrong with me because I really enjoy stuff like this lol.
New rule of the Internet:
Rule 101: SOMEBODY will make a second one.
The first one was
absolutely fucking horriblebad enough. I can't believe someone actually made a second oneOH GOD NO
DAFUQ?!??!?!
*takes off sunglasses* Mother of Celestia.
Y u do dis to me?!?
This is terrible. Horrible. So many commas that don't belong, even semicolons. It was like a skipping movie. All, I, read, was, this. No. NO.
Looks at title ... I expect this story to be the opposite of what I expect . And it was nice job it was actually depressing
Just horrible, story line is rushed, grammer, dear celestia, its the WORST POSSIBLE THING EVER! No detail, very vague, you just skipped the rape scene, if you don't know how to do rape in a story, ask for assistance, get an editor, if you can fix this up, I'm sure it would live up to its name
3682690 Thanks for the comment, but that's my style of writing, I try to leave out the disgusting parts, like the r*** and stuff. Sorry for all the punctuation, but that's just how I write. This story was a complete joke, I was bored and in a Skype call with my friend. He told me about the story 'Sweet Apple Massacre' I read it, thus a sequel was created. Because I love to write, I would make a third, but ehhh. Thanks for all the comments everybody. Just to let you know, please DO hate. This story is foul and gross, and deserves to be looked down upon.
3702039 I'm sorry, do you like to read clopfics? This story is a joke, I wrote it right after I read the first one. I don't care if you want to read pony sex. Fuck you. I do what I want, this story is meant as a joke, not to be taken seriously. So I'm sorry that I left RAPE out of the fucking story. It was sick of me to write this, but do you actually want to masturbate to a sick story like this? What's wrong with you?
3684313 This story is a joke, the first one was sad and depressing, but this one is kind of equal in my opinion, this story is wretched. But I don't understand how you left a positive comment on this.
3710473 I dont read it for the clop, I don't read it to masturbate, because something involving sex means their a clopper, omg, how stereotypical, I read it because I find it amusing, maybe that's the way I think, I don't care, but going and swearing on a reply, well, all you are is a mewling quim, I take my leave and leave you with that, GOOD DAY TO YOU!!
There is so much unnecessary punctuation in this. If somethin' ain't broken, don't fix it. What I mean is don't continue a story if you don't need to.
3710473 and yet the second thing i ever cloped to was cupcakes i think the first part i clopped to as 13th and this is 22nd before you ask what's wrong with me im a psycopath 50% of time and i loved this
WTF DUDE, WTF!!! WHAT IS DIS SHIT?
I FEEL SICK.. 
This story lacks reason to hold it together. I mean the first Massacre was more descriptive with the rape so one would think it was the worse. However this one feels like it lacks a lot. It makes Mac seem complete out of element even in a evil murderous way.
Entertainment at its finest