Nah, nah-nah-nah-nah-nah-nah-nah-nah.
Perfect. The impossible word, because there is no such thing. All her life, from baby to alicorn, Twilight has wanted nothing more, but to be perfect. But what do you do, when you're not perfect?
(Props to anyone who guesses what the title image is)
(Also experiment, feedback needed, for better writing)
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I was drawn here by the Courage the Cowardly dog picture. Now, to read!
3566707 I knew there had to be someone who would know the picture!
Poor Twi. She'll always remember the things she did wrong, and will utterly ignore the things she did right.
When I saw this when I was a kid I couldn't sleep well at night, I feared that I would see this hellspawn in my dreams
3566792 Courage was a weird (But awesome) show.
That... thing looks like a aborted fetus. I hated the "your not prefect" monster. Also, good story.
The reminder of Courage the Cowardly Dog crashed into me like a freight train made of nostalgia. The story was also quite lovely.
It could use some editing to fix grammar and sentence structure, and some of the parts seemed rushed, like when Celestia visits Twilight, but I liked how you explored the perfection vs. imperfection with Twilight as a new princess. I did something similar in a short story I wrote about Twilight, except it was before she was princess. Good job!
3569319 I thank thee for the comment, this was more or less an experiment for me. And at times my grammar can be a little weird, but 'tis a tricky thing. If it felt rushed, it's probably because i usually write really short stories. If i remember correctly isn't there a one thousand word pre-req?