• Member Since 11th Feb, 2012
  • offline last seen Aug 11th, 2012

Brondiscipulus


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PLEASE READ THIS WHOLE DESCRIPTION

Dawn Shine is a simple 17-year-old pegasus pony, with a not so simple 17-year-old problem... He doesn't have a cutie mark.

How, if he doesn't even have his cutie mark, does this pegasus manage to become the most famous adventurer in all of Equestria? How did he go from "Dawn Shine" to "Shining Armor"? HOW, you ask, does he earn his cutie mark? Well, read and find out...

This is a work-in-progress, so I am obviously not done. As well, it is my first attempt ever at writing. Please tell me what you think of it in the description, including any criticism, praise, corrections or suggestions. Also, tell me if you want me to write more!

This is the backstory for my own, personal OC. Not all future stories will be about him, but some will, so I felt that a story about his life would be appropriate.

Character tags will be added as the story progresses, and the category/categories will be updated as well. I need a little bit of professional or semi-professional help with the story artwork. Please contact me if you think you might be able to help.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 3 )

OC ponies?
No cutie mark?

The originality is stunning

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Cheers
~iraqlobstah

306513 -_- This IS my first story you know... Whatever, I guess I did ask for "any criticism"...

306911
And it being your first Fanfiction definitely shows in the
word count.

I appreciate your efforts though, you gave me some
material to troll :D

Cheers
~iraqlobstah

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