- Member Since 16th Sep, 2012
- offline last seen Sep 18th, 2020
oop
The author formerly known as Comet Chaser, still writing, still awesome. For further inquiries, well, good luck... I'm bad at getting around to things.
Also LikedSimilarAuthor
- ShotgunNeko · 28k words · 287 13 · 5.9k views
- Mariacheat-Brony · 129k words · 1,207 35 · 16k views
- Loyal · 83k words · 406 20 · 5.5k views
- overlord-flinx · 5.7k words · 211 11 · 3.6k views
- Nether · 144k words · 1,022 61 · 15k views
- TigerSwirl448 · 105k words · 58 18 · 1.2k views
- RitsuD95 · 5.1k words · 190 6 · 5.2k views
- overlord-flinx · 6.5k words · 123 7 · 1.8k views
Stats
Page generated in 0.115 seconds
Total duration
1,026 users online
1,811,872 hits today, 2,073,628 yesterday
FIMFiction
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Follow & Support Us
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Damn. (immature comment first) That was HAWT! Me gusta mucho!
Okay, now for the stuff you care about. Very impressive work! I have never seen an RD/VS pairing before! You pulled it off nicely, making Dash such a slut... Sounds like the start of a relationship.... maybe a sequel?
THAT WAS AMAZING. I never expected RD to be such a slut, but there are things that are hidden to the human mind that others my already see, other than that, I fucking loved it. there were some errors though so I would suggest looking through it and fixing some of it, just leave what you have and edit punctuation placement.
awesome
Uhh wow. That was.. surprising.
That being the word that comes to mind first.
I honestly do not know why this does not have more attention. Sure there could be more meat to this story, a bit of a better sequence of events, but hey, its a one shot. Not like one should be to critical over it. But I will say that this is the first story I've read with this pairing in this light. I was not disappointed.
I would hope that you look more into this because the dynamic of the story it's self is also something I have not read the characters portraying either. Good job on that.
Where did you get the cover art?