Somehow, I'm expecting some S&M threesome with Vinyl, Dash, and Twilight. With Dash as the sub of course. Or an Alpha Vinyl and Beta Dash, either one I guess. Still, goot stchuff.
Look up the character Prinny, and you'll know why I type 'dood' in all my lines, and shrug when people say I spell dude wrong when I'm actually spelling it 'dood' on purpose.
So, Twilight lied to Rarity about having a penis. That's going to backfire. I can't wait for Rarity to find out the truth. I want to see her curse Twilight out for lying in her face. I really want to see Rarity's legs over Twilight's shoulders. Rainbow Dash reversed what really happened to her and Vinyl tells her that the new employer at Sparks Manor is a dickmare. That is REALLY going to backfire. The three of them have got to meet together eventually. I will do my best to forget the Blueblood scene. When are we going to meet Applejack and Pinkie? And what is this about Colgate?
3732748 Barb just told her sister that Barb is in love with Twilight and Sweetie Belle will never be as close with Rarity as they are, causing Sweetie to think she has to eat Rarity out to get closer. If I was Rarity, I would be a bitch too.
“You have a lot of explaining to do, Young Miss. After you help me find my sister so I can explain the difference between platonic love and incest,” Rarity scowled, instantly making Barb wilt under her glare.
3733829 she had a right to be angry however it is not within rarities rights to go on punishing barb or anyone else cause she see's fit and even if it was in her right to punish other employees, she can't make barb do work she gets paid to do as a punishment.
3734440 And what did Twilight do? Ban Barb from her room for a month and get locks on her door? That'll teach her lesson. Forgive me, but I'm glad Rarity didn't just let that go. I just wish she showed more backbone against Twilight.
3734600 considering rarity A. slandered her uncle's name and B. lied to take a job she has no buisness with, rarity should be thinking about the thin ice she's already on. backbone won't feed her or sweety.
Hey, a new chapter! Just finished reading it, dood. So far, it's pretty good, no noticeable errors to my OCD, but then again, I've been sleep deprived all break, dood. (Lots of gamer time)
Good job again! I really like that diamond dog character, he'll be seen more right? Will Barb also meet the the other CMCs? Will Twilight have Barb meet the futa diamond dog girl? Can't wait for the next chapter! I know it'll be awesome! On another note, because of your awesomeness I am giving you a platoon of prinnies for you to command! Just don't blow up a major city with some of them okay? Lahaurel's still paying that off .
3732138 Rarity has Sweetie's testimony, and Barb's testimony against Twilight, dood. She knows Twilight is packing it. Twilight is just delusional that Rarity is still suspicious. I think Rainbow wouldn't want to tell one of her best friends that a unicorn beat her a few times with a ice spell and started calling her 'My Little Bitch', dood. Looks better to say that the other person is the bitch. I dunno about Aplejack and Pinkie is coming up soon, I'm sorry about Blueblood and Colgate is for the Misadventures Story, dood.
3732438 Blueblood will either pretend Twilight doesn't have it or try to have her burned at the stake for being a demon, dood.
3732536 Thank you, and RariTwi is.... not on the menu just yet, dood. Blueblood is a egotistical jerk as I wanted him to appear as, and I wanted Barb to be less 'Barb' that also keeps the promise of Barb getting Twi's D later in the story, dood.
3732748 I'm writing this, dood. Twilight's gonna cock smack Rainbow. And I think a comment about Rarity being a bitch was mentioned, dood.
3733829 How would YOU feel if your little sister was told that the incest loving dragon girl said that her love for her big dick sister was more real than the love you and your sister shared, dood? I thought it would go a little like what I described in the story... then again, I did that more a weak attempt at comedy, dood.
3734114 The Rarity and Barb scenes.... yeah, dood. But I hope that's not hte case for everything else, dood.
3734440 Good thing I sorta knew that, dood. Or I might have had Twilight let Barb scrub the floors.
3734600 HEY, I'm pretty sure getting a month long banned from the room of someone you like to suck off is pretty heavy for a young dragoness to handle, to find out there are locks... oh boy, that'll crush Barb's feelings, dood. And Rarity is a character I may never learn to write properly for, dood.
3735405 At this point, she's starting to find the thicker pieces of ice, dood. Also... thanks everyone that's apart of this comment train, that all might help me in future chappies, dood.
3735619 It's the sleep deprivation, dood. I know there are mistakes that me and like four people missed, dood. Also, game on, dood.
3735769 Thanks, dood. Bonez actually appeared in Welcome to Equestria as a Gem dealer for Gigavolt, and I liked the idea of a OC Diamond Dog that sounds like Iron Tager from Blazblue so he stuck around in my head, dood. The Futa Dog girl will have a purpose later, dood. And It isn't wise to give me a platoon of prinnies... it's not sa- WAIT A MINUTE, Lahaurel? Paying for damages? What sorcery is this? It's Laharl and he doesn't pay for damages, he causes damages then laughs about it, dood. Disappoint.
3736653 Things changed after someone brought his father back to life and he had to explain the destroyed cities in hell. Glad you caught that though also, I already sent the prinnies over to you because it i had them I'd just make them all drop like bombs on Blueblood's place and think of all the poor mares that would suffer after already living in that hell.
Okay, dood. and I just beat KOTOR I for my first playthrough in about 6 years. I've only had it for a day, and I modded it, then beat it, light side, dood. I've been staying up till at least 4:00am at the latest.
I think I puked a little (metaphorically speaking) at the part with Blueblood... Wow, what a douchebag. I hope Barb ends up setting him on fire somehow at some point. I liked Bonez, though.
3732138 Huh, the way I read it was that she 'doesn't' have a penis. As in, I have one, but for the love of Celestia, Luna, and Faust, nopony better learn from you that I have one.
Well, whatever happens I'm looking forward to it.
I still think you should spell dood with one more "o".
3730913 I'm too poor to afford that third 'o', dood.
I was excited to see an update and realized I already read this chapter
It was good, very good. But I read it already
3730972 I'm sorry, dood. But it's technically your fault for clicking the link in the blog post.
But I'm sorry anyways, dood.
Somehow, I'm expecting some S&M threesome with Vinyl, Dash, and Twilight. With Dash as the sub of course. Or an Alpha Vinyl and Beta Dash, either one I guess.
Still, goot stchuff.
Hope for the next one soon.
3730997 by the way
That Blueblood scene
I had to go buy a new pair of sides.
Not sure if this is an embarrassing attempt to look cool or just unadulterated autism.
3731385 It's actually role-play, dood.
Look up the character Prinny, and you'll know why I type 'dood' in all my lines, and shrug when people say I spell dude wrong when I'm actually spelling it 'dood' on purpose.
I'm DrewB1442, and you're welcome. I didn't even do much besides correct one word and make a couple of comments.
So, Twilight lied to Rarity about having a penis. That's going to backfire. I can't wait for Rarity to find out the truth. I want to see her curse Twilight out for lying in her face. I really want to see Rarity's legs over Twilight's shoulders.
Rainbow Dash reversed what really happened to her and Vinyl tells her that the new employer at Sparks Manor is a dickmare. That is REALLY going to backfire. The three of them have got to meet together eventually.
I will do my best to forget the Blueblood scene. When are we going to meet Applejack and Pinkie? And what is this about Colgate?
I wonder What Blueblood's reaction would be if he knew Twilight was packing "something extra."
Vinylight is surprisingly hawt dood. [APPROVE]
Still, honestly I really look forward to seeing some Raritwi.
Oh Blueblood. May a pointy rock fall on your head. Or maybe have a run-in with Assassin!Octavia.
Barb....is.....getting a teensy tiny bit better with that last bit.
... i seriously hope twilight utterly dominates rainbow later on just because...
rarity definatly comes across as a bitch here.
3732138 Rarity clearly wasn't convinced when Twilight said she didn't have a penis so no backfire there, the rest might happen though.
3732748 Barb just told her sister that Barb is in love with Twilight and Sweetie Belle will never be as close with Rarity as they are, causing Sweetie to think she has to eat Rarity out to get closer. If I was Rarity, I would be a bitch too.
This chapter in a nutshell. Pony on, please.
3733829 she had a right to be angry however it is not within rarities rights to go on punishing barb or anyone else cause she see's fit and even if it was in her right to punish other employees, she can't make barb do work she gets paid to do as a punishment.
3734440 And what did Twilight do? Ban Barb from her room for a month and get locks on her door? That'll teach her lesson. Forgive me, but I'm glad Rarity didn't just let that go. I just wish she showed more backbone against Twilight.
3734600 considering rarity A. slandered her uncle's name and B. lied to take a job she has no buisness with, rarity should be thinking about the thin ice she's already on. backbone won't feed her or sweety.
Hey, a new chapter! Just finished reading it, dood. So far, it's pretty good, no noticeable errors to my OCD, but then again, I've been sleep deprived all break, dood. (Lots of gamer time)
Good job again! I really like that diamond dog character, he'll be seen more right? Will Barb also meet the the other CMCs? Will Twilight have Barb meet the futa diamond dog girl? Can't wait for the next chapter! I know it'll be awesome! On another note, because of your awesomeness I am giving you a platoon of prinnies for you to command! Just don't blow up a major city with some of them okay? Lahaurel's still paying that off .
3731622 I'm writing your name down so that the next time I see that, I'll credit you with your FIM account name, dood. Cause I think it's right.
3731757 Thanks, dood.
3732138 Rarity has Sweetie's testimony, and Barb's testimony against Twilight, dood. She knows Twilight is packing it. Twilight is just delusional that Rarity is still suspicious. I think Rainbow wouldn't want to tell one of her best friends that a unicorn beat her a few times with a ice spell and started calling her 'My Little Bitch', dood. Looks better to say that the other person is the bitch. I dunno about Aplejack and Pinkie is coming up soon, I'm sorry about Blueblood and Colgate is for the Misadventures Story, dood.
3732438 Blueblood will either pretend Twilight doesn't have it or try to have her burned at the stake for being a demon, dood.
3732536 Thank you, and RariTwi is.... not on the menu just yet, dood. Blueblood is a egotistical jerk as I wanted him to appear as, and I wanted Barb to be less 'Barb' that also keeps the promise of Barb getting Twi's D later in the story, dood.
3732748 I'm writing this, dood. Twilight's gonna cock smack Rainbow. And I think a comment about Rarity being a bitch was mentioned, dood.
3733803 You beat me to it, dood.
3733829 How would YOU feel if your little sister was told that the incest loving dragon girl said that her love for her big dick sister was more real than the love you and your sister shared, dood? I thought it would go a little like what I described in the story... then again, I did that more a weak attempt at comedy, dood.
3734114 The Rarity and Barb scenes.... yeah, dood. But I hope that's not hte case for everything else, dood.
3734440 Good thing I sorta knew that, dood. Or I might have had Twilight let Barb scrub the floors.
3734600 HEY, I'm pretty sure getting a month long banned from the room of someone you like to suck off is pretty heavy for a young dragoness to handle, to find out there are locks... oh boy, that'll crush Barb's feelings, dood. And Rarity is a character I may never learn to write properly for, dood.
3735405 At this point, she's starting to find the thicker pieces of ice, dood. Also... thanks everyone that's apart of this comment train, that all might help me in future chappies, dood.
3735619 It's the sleep deprivation, dood. I know there are mistakes that me and like four people missed, dood. Also, game on, dood.
3735769 Thanks, dood. Bonez actually appeared in Welcome to Equestria as a Gem dealer for Gigavolt, and I liked the idea of a OC Diamond Dog that sounds like Iron Tager from Blazblue so he stuck around in my head, dood. The Futa Dog girl will have a purpose later, dood. And It isn't wise to give me a platoon of prinnies... it's not sa- WAIT A MINUTE, Lahaurel? Paying for damages? What sorcery is this? It's Laharl and he doesn't pay for damages, he causes damages then laughs about it, dood. Disappoint.
3736653
Things changed after someone brought his father back to life and he had to explain the destroyed cities in hell. Glad you caught that though also, I already sent the prinnies over to you because it i had them I'd just make them all drop like bombs on Blueblood's place and think of all the poor mares that would suffer after already living in that hell.
3736653
YET
I can wait. It shall make it all the sweeter.
3736653
Okay, dood. and I just beat KOTOR I for my first playthrough in about 6 years. I've only had it for a day, and I modded it, then beat it, light side, dood. I've been staying up till at least 4:00am at the latest.
Yessssss. God I love it when I see a new chapter of this. Great work as always.
A good chappie; not the best, but a good one. Ooo! I just got a good idea, but I don't want to spoil it, so I'll make it on your chappie 7 gdoc.
I think I puked a little (metaphorically speaking) at the part with Blueblood... Wow, what a douchebag. I hope Barb ends up setting him on fire somehow at some point. I liked Bonez, though.
As always, do keep up the good work.
Only one key? So if there's a fire as she sleeps, no one can save her.
3732138 Huh, the way I read it was that she 'doesn't' have a penis. As in, I have one, but for the love of Celestia, Luna, and Faust, nopony better learn from you that I have one.
House Sparkle - Or the story of how Twilight goes around to menstruate in everyone's face.
May I ask way you made Rainbow a asshole.
I loved this chapter it was funny and sweet. But blueballs is still a ass.
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white and gold? is Blueblood's palace an Orokin Tower?
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Ya lol does he play warframe