A thought just occured to me. What ranking do you intend to give Rarity? I only ask because it's been my understanding that duke/duchess is a title usually conferred to family of royalty. Below them is as follows: Marquess/Marquis Count or Earl/Countess Viscount/Viscountess Baron/Baroness Knight
4669531 It was a decent run but... I got two stories that demand my attention and with work and all... It's tough to get from House Sparkle to Misadventures all the time, dood.
All I have to say to this is it's your story, I have no argument over the changes you made, along with the twist added, I look forward to seeing how this turns out.
4669618 Might be awhile, dood. It's on Hiatus until I feel comfortable writing more serious things, rather than the goofy 'clop-per-chapter' I had going with Misadventures, dood.
When you said 'them' in the previos chapter i could swore that you where talking about the changelings like in this chapter, and that the queen of changelings was going to be a kind ruler, now i have no objection on neither chapter( human and changeling) but i prefer this one because it stays closes to it roots so to speak but the human one was an interesting concept but great chapter on both, both i would have liked the sunset goes recives fluttershy at the door minus the barb part(since you seem to not want that anymore and i am ok with that) since it adds interaction between other characters among themself how they think of others or act around other pepole than twilight but again great chapter.
Also sorry if its hard to understand english is not my native language
4669936 Okay, dood. It's cool. While It was probably sad that the interaction between Fluttershy and Sunset was written out, I was more focused on Twilight's possible interest in Cheerilee, dood.
Huh, that bad about the humans? Didn't expect them to cause an uproar. I do like that you've written out that scene with Barb because it's been getting more and more annoying. In general, a much better direction than before.
Humans were replaced by griffons who were later replaced by Changelings
I was rather neutral about the human thing, neither for nor against it. Changelings, on the other hand, sound fun. Especially since that's an excellent opportunity to have Twilight bang Chrysalis in this universe as well. Twilight banging Chrysalis is never a bad thing, amirite?
Well, provided Chrysalis actually appears. So far, only Amaryllis and Metamorphosis have been mentioned.
KEEP GOING STRONG! You have nothing to worry about your story is pretty solid, actually surprising considering what your...target of the story was or is. the back ground events are nice. but very good job.
Gentle breeze guide you home, a warm smile welcome you home.
4878783 Yeah... sorry, dood. Between work and Misadventures four things and the fact that I can't keep a stable plot... I had to... I'll bring it back one day, dood. Promise.
hiatus is bad
A thought just occured to me. What ranking do you intend to give Rarity? I only ask because it's been my understanding that duke/duchess is a title usually conferred to family of royalty. Below them is as follows:
Marquess/Marquis
Count or Earl/Countess
Viscount/Viscountess
Baron/Baroness
Knight
Huh, interesting direction you seem to be going with Rarity at the end there. Also this chapter is much stronger than your first attempt at it.
4669531 It was a decent run but... I got two stories that demand my attention and with work and all... It's tough to get from House Sparkle to Misadventures all the time, dood.
4669543 I was thinking as a Lord/Lady or something, dood.
4669545 I literally though 'Why not?' at that point, dood. It was sort of planned since Chapter eight but kept forgetting, dood.
All I have to say to this is it's your story, I have no argument over the changes you made, along with the twist added, I look forward to seeing how this turns out.
4669618 Might be awhile, dood. It's on Hiatus until I feel comfortable writing more serious things, rather than the goofy 'clop-per-chapter' I had going with Misadventures, dood.
When you said 'them' in the previos chapter i could swore that you where talking about the changelings like in this chapter, and that the queen of changelings was going to be a kind ruler, now i have no objection on neither chapter( human and changeling) but i prefer this one because it stays closes to it roots so to speak but the human one was an interesting concept but great chapter on both, both i would have liked the sunset goes recives fluttershy at the door minus the barb part(since you seem to not want that anymore and i am ok with that) since it adds interaction between other characters among themself how they think of others or act around other pepole than twilight but again great chapter.
Also sorry if its hard to understand english is not my native language
4669936 Okay, dood. It's cool. While It was probably sad that the interaction between Fluttershy and Sunset was written out, I was more focused on Twilight's possible interest in Cheerilee, dood.
But I liked the Human part.
4670380 Sorry, dood.
I Was wondering Why you re updated THIS CHAPTER. Now I know.
4669547 seems legit, so ill wait
Huh, that bad about the humans? Didn't expect them to cause an uproar. I do like that you've written out that scene with Barb because it's been getting more and more annoying. In general, a much better direction than before.
I was rather neutral about the human thing, neither for nor against it. Changelings, on the other hand, sound fun. Especially since that's an excellent opportunity to have Twilight bang Chrysalis in this universe as well. Twilight banging Chrysalis is never a bad thing, amirite?
Well, provided Chrysalis actually appears. So far, only Amaryllis and Metamorphosis have been mentioned.
Overall, I think I like this version better.
4672300 Yeah... I think I brainfarted with Barb because I liked to try a tsundere approach? Yeah I dunno either, dood.
4673202 Chrysalis is pretty much a staple to any Changleing related thing, dood.
As I said in Gdocs, Good so far, dood . Whether there be humans or changelings, it's still a fun fic to read.
So! for now, I'm off to be OP in DBZ: Battle of Z as SSJG Goku.
KEEP GOING STRONG! You have nothing to worry about your story is pretty solid, actually surprising considering what your...target of the story was or is. the back ground events are nice. but very good job.
Gentle breeze guide you home, a warm smile welcome you home.
What a twist. Also, This is a good addition, my prinny friend. I would give you a tip but I only have Macca from the SMT games.
That was fun. Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
I wish this wasn't in hiatus. I really enjoyed this story
4787380 Maybe, probably, I wouldn't know since I'm rarely actually serious, dood.
It sucks that this is on hiatus , I really want to see how sunset reacts to twilight's "secret" .... And the sex that I hope will soon follow
4878783 Yeah... sorry, dood. Between work and Misadventures four things and the fact that I can't keep a stable plot... I had to... I'll bring it back one day, dood. Promise.
4958568 I was half tempted to have someone shout that, dood.
5161634 I felt like giving her a slightly more abrasive attitude, dood. In the show, she's kind of a jerk, this just amps it a bit, dood.
5306614 Thanks, dood.
where did you get the cover art?
5347611 Wrabbit drew it for me, dood.
5348016 wow, perfect cover dude
5348142 Thanks, dood. All credit goes to Wrabbit for doing it for me, dood.
U nice story good belans of clop and Romance and good Lare of comedy
You have u sniper in overwatch now have u upvote on my
All i have to say is OMG nuff said.
hopefully this story brings raRITY BACK TO THE SPARKLE HOUSEHOLD Because i actually like this story