Well i just wanna say is ... FINALLY SEXY TIME The story had flowed out very nicely if i do so myself, but others might find a few problems here an there but overall it was a great chapter. Though i do wonder is vinly going to be like pinkie pie in you other story or are they all going to be different from that story?
3671920 Vinyl might take a page out of Misadventure's Pinkie's book... but She does have a job to do, so... sexy times with Vinyl won't happen as often as Pinkie's sexy times, dood. I wanna try and make each character different from the other story... example: Where Pinkie is open to all sorta of sex in the Misadventures, House Sparkle Pinkie will still be a happy party pony, but the mere mention of sex will make her face flush and increase her desire to GTFO, dood... hopefully I'll make this happen in a cute way.
3671982 Well that would nice be a nice change of pace. Though i wonder if she is going to be shy, is she be submissive like Fluttershy when they finally do the horizontal tango of love? Oh i hope you don't forget to add some that too. What is a story without a bit of romance in it?
3673660 While it would be funny... I actually don't find impregnation very hot if it's written to be a accidental thing, dood. If they are fucking out of love and don't mind the extra body inside the female, then it's all good with me.
3672855 Yeah i know what you mean, I was fine with the movie,them being human was nice, until i saw him. Yeah, sentry is a nice guy and all but the idea of him having a romantic relationship with Twilight really pisses me off. Call me petty , but that is just how i feel when couples like that happen. Sorry for rambling on about that.
3673733 I'd be more supportive of the shipping if it didn't feel so forced and Flash had a MUCH better part in the story, despite my dislike for fictional heterosexuality. But because of how Flash was introduced and forced to be Twilight's crush... It baffles me how so many people ship the two, dood.
3673750 I know right. There was no build up to the damn relationship, the creator slap a bunch crap together and named Twisentry. i would been more accepting to it if they added more to the relationship... maybe. But what do you expect from a High School theme movie. New girl in school meets a cool guy and they some how get great chemistry going between them. That... sucks.
I really hope this deal with Barb works. It's not that I am particularly squicked out by the incest, just Barb's borderline yandere-like possessiveness kind of pisses me off. Overly attached little sister.
3675134 Hey, it's fine. I'm sure you had a good reason for it. Remember what I said, you are the writer, we're just the audience. We gotta trust the author to know what they're doing and not browbeat them into doing what we want to see happen. It's a lesson I learned the hard way.
Rainbow is a bitch and Twilight lost her virginity to Vinyl. Plus, Rarity is scarred from hearing incest. I also like how you incorporated the canon as happening in the distant past. How long before Rarity finds out about Twilight's 'second horn'? I also wonder when Twilight will meet 'Her Little Bitch' again?
3675808 3677080 I think the only way for this deal to work is for Barb to actually socialize with others her own age. I don't think she has ever went to school, did she?
3678702 She did... and only had two friends, dood. As mentioned in the first few chapters. But... yeah, she's dependent on Twilight for a lot of things, dood.
If I were a smoker I think I'd need a cigarette after reading that. I love this story, my friend! I'm also wondering how the month will work out for Barb. She's friends with Sweetie but the age line in this story in my opinion crosses out the possibility for a crush. I really kinda do hope that she finds someone else though. Nothing against that hot incest thing going on but with how possessive she is... Also, I'm hoping to see Rainbow again soon; that was an interesting choice to give her that personality and look. I mean it both fits and doesn't to me... Also, HOT Vinyl scene dude! Good Lord, this chapter ruled!
3679913 Awesome, thanks for enjoying the story, dood. Knowing me... Barb will be getting the D, but hopefully this 'deal' willt each her something, regardless of what she may win or lose, dood. And Rainbow Dash.... Rainbow kinda just happened, dood.
Well i just wanna say is ... FINALLY SEXY TIME
The story had flowed out very nicely if i do so myself, but others might find a few problems here an there but overall it was a great chapter. Though i do wonder is vinly going to be like pinkie pie in you other story or are they all going to be different from that story?
3671920 Vinyl might take a page out of Misadventure's Pinkie's book... but She does have a job to do, so... sexy times with Vinyl won't happen as often as Pinkie's sexy times, dood. I wanna try and make each character different from the other story... example: Where Pinkie is open to all sorta of sex in the Misadventures, House Sparkle Pinkie will still be a happy party pony, but the mere mention of sex will make her face flush and increase her desire to GTFO, dood... hopefully I'll make this happen in a cute way.
Fap, Fap, Fap.
3672046 I didn't think the sex scene was THAT good, dood. I find that rather flattering somehow.
3672187 I never fuck up usernames on purpose, dood... I was just too lazy to find it.
3672060 what made it really good was the part where barb just out of the blue knew somepony was stealing Twilight;s virginity.
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Though technically she is still a virgin... well half at least.
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Well that would nice be a nice change of pace. Though i wonder if she is going to be shy, is she be submissive like Fluttershy when they finally do the horizontal tango of love? Oh i hope you don't forget to add some that too. What is a story without a bit of romance in it?
3672422 well barb was still pissed that Somepony was stealing Twilight's Penile virginity.
A NEW CHAPTER! WOOHOO! oh, and rarity got what she deserved for deciding to eavesdrop instead of being an honest pony.
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Normally I'd agree with you, but then there as Equestria Girls... the only Pony fic where it would be better without the romance, dood.
I grinned almost the whole way through this chapter. You're doing it right, dood.
Now I'm looking forward to the next chapters of your stories... Much fun will be had, I suspect :D
3672962 Yay, thanks dood.
...All of my yes.
kinda hoping that the potion didn't work for lol's.
3673660 While it would be funny... I actually don't find impregnation very hot if it's written to be a accidental thing, dood. If they are fucking out of love and don't mind the extra body inside the female, then it's all good with me.
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Yeah i know what you mean, I was fine with the movie,them being human was nice, until i saw him. Yeah, sentry is a nice guy and all but the idea of him having a romantic relationship with Twilight really pisses me off. Call me petty , but that is just how i feel when couples like that happen. Sorry for rambling on about that.
3673733 I'd be more supportive of the shipping if it didn't feel so forced and Flash had a MUCH better part in the story, despite my dislike for fictional heterosexuality. But because of how Flash was introduced and forced to be Twilight's crush... It baffles me how so many people ship the two, dood.
3673750
I know right.
There was no build up to the damn relationship, the creator slap a bunch crap together and named Twisentry. i would been more accepting to it if they added more to the relationship... maybe. But what do you expect from a High School theme movie. New girl in school meets a cool guy and they some how get great chemistry going between them. That... sucks.
3673704 well there's always a chance for that yet too.
3674148 I'm sorry I scarred Rarity for a few months until she get's Twilight's D, dood.
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Well, that was kinda silly, but you are the writer. [/shrug]
so is there an explanation for why Rainbow is so hostile in this fic?
3674882...
I don't know logic anymore, dood.
3674902 It'll come up eventually, dood.
I really hope this deal with Barb works. It's not that I am particularly squicked out by the incest, just Barb's borderline yandere-like possessiveness kind of pisses me off. Overly attached little sister.
Oh, and the clop scene?
God-DAMN
3675134
Hey, it's fine. I'm sure you had a good reason for it. Remember what I said, you are the writer, we're just the audience. We gotta trust the author to know what they're doing and not browbeat them into doing what we want to see happen. It's a lesson I learned the hard way.
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yeah, she' clearly can't see the distinction between love and possessiveness, lets hope thats simply for now
Rainbow is a bitch and Twilight lost her virginity to Vinyl. Plus, Rarity is scarred from hearing incest. I also like how you incorporated the canon as happening in the distant past. How long before Rarity finds out about Twilight's 'second horn'? I also wonder when Twilight will meet 'Her Little Bitch' again?
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I think the only way for this deal to work is for Barb to actually socialize with others her own age. I don't think she has ever went to school, did she?
3678702 She did... and only had two friends, dood. As mentioned in the first few chapters. But... yeah, she's dependent on Twilight for a lot of things, dood.
If I were a smoker I think I'd need a cigarette after reading that. I love this story, my friend! I'm also wondering how the month will work out for Barb. She's friends with Sweetie but the age line in this story in my opinion crosses out the possibility for a crush. I really kinda do hope that she finds someone else though. Nothing against that hot incest thing going on but with how possessive she is... Also, I'm hoping to see Rainbow again soon; that was an interesting choice to give her that personality and look. I mean it both fits and doesn't to me... Also, HOT Vinyl scene dude! Good Lord, this chapter ruled!
3679913 Awesome, thanks for enjoying the story, dood. Knowing me... Barb will be getting the D, but hopefully this 'deal' willt each her something, regardless of what she may win or lose, dood. And Rainbow Dash.... Rainbow kinda just happened, dood.
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I see...whatever happens, I know you'll make it a great story.
Accidentally capitalized the "I" in Silver, dood.
3697330 WELL that's awkward, dood.
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Wait, what? how is that awkward, dood? I'm confused now.
3699697 That I left a mistake in the finished chapter, dood.
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Oh, well, I feel kinda stupid now, dood.
Anyway, I'm off to read a collab Kaidan helped with. So far, it's really funny, dood.
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My little dragon can't be this cute
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Especially since she isn't being very cute at all.
I am hoping upcoming shenanigans change that.
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I made a reference, hoping someone would pick up on it, no one did.
3708589 The Ziabotsu is disappoint, dood.
They are also disappoint in my butchering of the group's name, dood.
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Actually I did get it.At least in so far as there is a manga called My Little Sister Can't Be This Cute.
Barb just bugs me.
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Well I was hoping that anyone at all would continue making semi-obscure references.
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What do you mean disappoint?
3710970 Referencing a youtube channel, dood. and mocking how I can't spell something, dood.
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Disappoint in you, or disappoint in me?
3711287 Them disappoint in me, dood.