So, it updates then goes right back to hiatus? That bites. So, we get some more info on how the world became the way it is. So, Bonez's kids (though just his dickgirl daughter at first) appear! How did Rarity inherit the title anyway? Well, at least Twilight admits to her mistakes with Barb, even if the dragon is naturally clingy. Her uncle's perverseness does seem rather obvious in hindsight. I see there's still some anti-changeling grudges, hopefully they're unjustified. First comment!
5577106 A lot of people kept poking me for an update than I just fell over and made a chapter, dood. Sorry.
Basically I'm saying that Rarity inherited Tall Tale Mountains just like Twilight did because I'm lazy, dood. And Fimfiction rules prevent me for actually writing underage sex, so Roxy will not be getting any sex scenes at all, dood. And yes... Changelings are officially the old evil because no one wants humans... even though I'm now making them out to be an endangered species, dood.
5577438 I dunno, maybe dood. I'll get back to you when this becomes my main focus again.
5578033 I recall getting called out on it when talking to Psi-Nova about his fic, dood. I dunno if it's true or not but I decided to try and play it all safe. I just asked a Mod to let me see a list of rules that I may or may not have read.
5578089 And now I give you permission to curse me because I probably won't be touching this for a few months, dood. Good news is, I've finally finished Mating Season, bad news... I still got a bit of Misadventures to get through, dood.
5578546 I think the site has an issue with Humanoid foalcon due to it might be being a UK site or somehting with google, i dunno, dood. No answer yet though.
Fusion, I could kiss you then leave you to the horrors of Etna. I love this story and loved the new chapter (kinda hoping the Rarity Duchess thing isn't permenant though) then then it's back to hiatus? That's it no golden prinny statue for you. On a more serious note, you're doing an awesome job and can't wait for more. Thanks for the update, dood!
55785465578556 I am almost positive that anthro/human/humanized isn't allowed for obvious reasons, but "regular" pony, foalcon, IS allowed, since they aren't bipedal, as proven by the foalcon folder in the clopfics group.
5580670 5578546 I found it, dood! It's in the Guidelines and Rules when you go to edit your story front or making up a new story, dood.
Don't Post
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given with what was explained about roxy earlier isn't i entirely possible that if barb where to find out she would start projecting onto roxy? psycologicaly unhealthy but it would get her off of twiligth for a while.
5584115 That could be a thing... or Barb gets greedy and tries to pull twilight and Roxy into a big harem for herself, dood. Because that's what everyone things dragons do.
5584126 You know I just remembered something when I was reading this chapter. In chapter 6 (I think) of this fic, Prince Blueblood said that he stood above Twilight because he was a Prince and she was a Duchess. That would normally be true 'IF' he was the right kind of Prince and he's not.
Blueblood while related to Celestia is not part of the immediate ruling family and is therefore not a 'ruling' (a Prince/Princess that rules a kingdom) Prince like Celestia, Luna and Cadance. His title of Prince is just a formality and does not have the same authority and/or power that a 'ruling Prince/Princess would have.
Blueblood is what you would call a 'Sovereign' Prince, members of the nobility above the rank of Count but below Duke. A Sovereign Prince/Princess may rule a territory in a kingdom but not necessarily the actual kingdom (fun fact Twilight also falls into this rank. She is technically a Sovereign Princess).
In your fic Twilight Sparkle holds the rank of Duchess, witch outranks a 'Sovereign' Prince (Blueblood) but is directly below and/or equal to a 'ruling' Prince/Princess (Celestia, Cadance and Luna). So technically Twilight stands above Blueblood in terms of status, influence and authority.
You can find more info about royal and noble ranks if you go here.
Ah, okay. Thanks for hunting that down. I wasn't planning on doing any lolicon (at least, not with any MLP characters), but it's always better to know what the rules are before getting slapped down by management.
5584998 Technically, Equestria is a principality, since it is ruled by 2 (or 3?) princesses, not truly a kingdom. Since the Crystal Empire is an empire, Cadance should have been upgraded to Empress (let's see if Hasbro does the right thing, or tries to have it's cake and eat it too). Now, I'm not sure just what principality Blueblood rules over, or if his princedom is really just an honorary title, like "Defender of the Realm" or some such, or if even is related to the princesses at all; not a lot has been said about him.
5584998 5585197 Well, when I do come back to this... I'm probably going to fight to have my cake and eat it too, like hasbro does on a daily basis, dood.
In this story, Blueblood outranks Twilight because he lords over Canterlot, and Twilight 'kinda-sorta' outranks everyone else because she controls Everfree Forest, the former capital of Equestria... she doesn't know that part yet, dood.
might i add this universes of alternate univervse spike is simply beatiful what with alll those naughty naughty thoughts your cramming down our thorats espechelay with this alternate universies oh so difficult to spot merchadinsing for the fin and jake model of marceline in other words buy our over expensive shit hilarios
that and temtpting us with crap that isn't even ready yet but just an idea gets a lovely sin from everybody why because how dare you that sin is just funny in my brain however from the fact that you are adding a crap ton of other well known crap to this book is lovely but don't you write it unless it s ready
trust me when i say the show fucked my ability to belive that frindship can't actually do those things and thus if you can't seem to attempt to stand on your own two legs i my have too abandon your stuff but i will still read your stuff why because it is just that good and beautifully done however please do not right about ditzy being crosseyed iv read enough of that shit from other less sucseesful authors not willing to bridge the gap that doesen't mean i don't like derpy however her crossed eye s will hold a place in my heart
Actually, I've been busy lately... only been able to play on the old handheld for the last little bit except for the minor plays of 'Binding of Issac' or writing, dood.
by the way third fusion curios little nitpick that will definitly not change my opinon on the story will you include the friends forever comic into this story or not just curiose
With Rarity inheiring a royal title, does this means she's out of the marem? Please tell me that's not going to happen and instead she will be able to formally aproach Twilight.
5848003 Thanks, dood. I do not speak native german at all so I needed to ask for help in that regard and kinda fear for the next time I need to have Photo speak again. Hopefully it will work it's out, dood.
So, it updates then goes right back to hiatus? That bites. So, we get some more info on how the world became the way it is. So, Bonez's kids (though just his dickgirl daughter at first) appear! How did Rarity inherit the title anyway? Well, at least Twilight admits to her mistakes with Barb, even if the dragon is naturally clingy. Her uncle's perverseness does seem rather obvious in hindsight. I see there's still some anti-changeling grudges, hopefully they're unjustified. First comment!
5577106 A lot of people kept poking me for an update than I just fell over and made a chapter, dood. Sorry.
Basically I'm saying that Rarity inherited Tall Tale Mountains just like Twilight did because I'm lazy, dood. And Fimfiction rules prevent me for actually writing underage sex, so Roxy will not be getting any sex scenes at all, dood. And yes... Changelings are officially the old evil because no one wants humans... even though I'm now making them out to be an endangered species, dood.
5577122 Aha! So the changelings are secretly humans, but they dress up like bugs so that no one will suspect.
That's news to me. Can you tell me where that rule is?
5577438 I dunno, maybe dood. I'll get back to you when this becomes my main focus again.
5578033 I recall getting called out on it when talking to Psi-Nova about his fic, dood. I dunno if it's true or not but I decided to try and play it all safe. I just asked a Mod to let me see a list of rules that I may or may not have read.
5578089 And now I give you permission to curse me because I probably won't be touching this for a few months, dood. Good news is, I've finally finished Mating Season, bad news... I still got a bit of Misadventures to get through, dood.
Let me know what he says, because there's a lot of foalcon on the site, with more being added all the time. I kinda really doubt that's a thing here.
5578546 I think the site has an issue with Humanoid foalcon due to it might be being a UK site or somehting with google, i dunno, dood. No answer yet though.
Fusion, I could kiss you then leave you to the horrors of Etna. I love this story and loved the new chapter (kinda hoping the Rarity Duchess thing isn't permenant though) then then it's back to hiatus? That's it no golden prinny statue for you. On a more serious note, you're doing an awesome job and can't wait for more. Thanks for the update, dood!
5578546 5578556 I am almost positive that anthro/human/humanized isn't allowed for obvious reasons, but "regular" pony, foalcon, IS allowed, since they aren't bipedal, as proven by the foalcon folder in the clopfics group.
You didn't disappoint on the first chapter in months. Now the wait continues once more
It makes me giggle when I see dood as a pagebreaker though :p
5578875 Thanks and sorry, dood.
5579056 I was just told that the rule is in the FAQs page... still can't find it, dood.
5579075 Gotta use something, dood.
5579554
It's not a bad thing, it's great :D
5579554 There's even a foalcon group, man.
5580670 I just looked at it and all their stories are all pony foalcon, none of it are Anthromorphic or human children, dood.
5580670
5578546 I found it, dood! It's in the Guidelines and Rules when you go to edit your story front or making up a new story, dood.
Should i re-read this story again if you made any changes to the chapters?
5583962 I made very minor changes, dood. The story should still be the same... unless I forgot in the week since I did it, dood.
5583964
Okay thank you.
given with what was explained about roxy earlier isn't i entirely possible that if barb where to find out she would start projecting onto roxy? psycologicaly unhealthy but it would get her off of twiligth for a while.
5584115 That could be a thing... or Barb gets greedy and tries to pull twilight and Roxy into a big harem for herself, dood. Because that's what everyone things dragons do.
5584126
You know I just remembered something when I was reading this chapter. In chapter 6 (I think) of this fic, Prince Blueblood said that he stood above Twilight because he was a Prince and she was a Duchess. That would normally be true 'IF' he was the right kind of Prince and he's not.
Blueblood while related to Celestia is not part of the immediate ruling family and is therefore not a 'ruling' (a Prince/Princess that rules a kingdom) Prince like Celestia, Luna and Cadance. His title of Prince is just a formality and does not have the same authority and/or power that a 'ruling Prince/Princess would have.
Blueblood is what you would call a 'Sovereign' Prince, members of the nobility above the rank of Count but below Duke. A Sovereign Prince/Princess may rule a territory in a kingdom but not necessarily the actual kingdom (fun fact Twilight also falls into this rank. She is technically a Sovereign Princess).
In your fic Twilight Sparkle holds the rank of Duchess, witch outranks a 'Sovereign' Prince (Blueblood) but is directly below and/or equal to a 'ruling' Prince/Princess (Celestia, Cadance and Luna). So technically Twilight stands above Blueblood in terms of status, influence and authority.
You can find more info about royal and noble ranks if you go here.
Ah, okay. Thanks for hunting that down. I wasn't planning on doing any lolicon (at least, not with any MLP characters), but it's always better to know what the rules are before getting slapped down by management.
5584998
Technically, Equestria is a principality, since it is ruled by 2 (or 3?) princesses, not truly a kingdom. Since the Crystal Empire is an empire, Cadance should have been upgraded to Empress (let's see if Hasbro does the right thing, or tries to have it's cake and eat it too). Now, I'm not sure just what principality Blueblood rules over, or if his princedom is really just an honorary title, like "Defender of the Realm" or some such, or if even is related to the princesses at all; not a lot has been said about him.
5584998
5585197 Well, when I do come back to this... I'm probably going to fight to have my cake and eat it too, like hasbro does on a daily basis, dood.
In this story, Blueblood outranks Twilight because he lords over Canterlot, and Twilight 'kinda-sorta' outranks everyone else because she controls Everfree Forest, the former capital of Equestria... she doesn't know that part yet, dood.
might i add this universes of alternate univervse spike is simply beatiful what with alll those naughty naughty thoughts your cramming down our thorats espechelay with this alternate universies oh so difficult to spot merchadinsing for the fin and jake model of marceline in other words buy our over expensive shit hilarios
that and temtpting us with crap that isn't even ready yet but just an idea gets a lovely sin from everybody why because how dare you that sin is just funny in my brain however from the fact that you are adding a crap ton of other well known crap to this book is lovely but don't you write it unless it s ready
and i see your taking a break to wait for next season of mlp to corupt like abeautiful golden goose thus making this book endless in the long run
5607384 Actually I'm taking a break from this so I can finish my other stuff, dood.
dAMMIT WHY CAN'T people just let me assume shit it's utterly random and thus hilarios
5609239 But... I can't argue with that other than telling the truth, dood.
yes i freakin knew it was fact yay me im freakin psychic
please at least tell me its only going to follow twilight and friends uther wise i may have to leave this series and all that stuff
trust me when i say the show fucked my ability to belive that frindship can't actually do those things and thus if you can't seem to attempt to stand on your own two legs i my have too abandon your stuff but i will still read your stuff why because it is just that good and beautifully done however please do not right about ditzy being crosseyed iv read enough of that shit from other less sucseesful authors not willing to bridge the gap that doesen't mean i don't like derpy however her crossed eye s will hold a place in my heart
5613276 Still not 100% sure if I meant that to be a joke, dood.
Watz with all the dood, dood.
5623446 I'm a prinny, dood. That's why.
5624051 ok dood, got Gmod, dood?
5624068 Unfortunately, no dood.
Actually, I've been busy lately... only been able to play on the old handheld for the last little bit except for the minor plays of 'Binding of Issac' or writing, dood.
5624080 damn, dood, cause I'm making a sandbox war zone Server and I'm recruiting users here, do you know someone who has Gmod?
5624082 Sorry, dood. Can't help ya, good luck though.
by the way third fusion curios little nitpick that will definitly not change my opinon on the story will you include the friends forever comic into this story or not just curiose
5637627 The friends forever comic? I don't know that one, dood.
well basically its a comic book sieres with the main 6 as the focus making the usual dumber than hell decisions that we know and cringe at
that and the entire series is meant to get us intrested in the backround ponies of every kind from big mac to dr hooves
With Rarity inheiring a royal title, does this means she's out of the marem? Please tell me that's not going to happen and instead she will be able to formally aproach Twilight.
5832891 Twilight will pork Rarity... but I dunno when, dood.
5832908 I do hope that eventually, maybe she would use her old maid/buttler dress for when she gets her turn.
5848003 Thanks, dood. I do not speak native german at all so I needed to ask for help in that regard and kinda fear for the next time I need to have Photo speak again. Hopefully it will work it's out, dood.
6054887 Glad you like it so far, dood. I hope you enjoy the rest.
6056955 You are talking to the wrong author, dood. It gets colder in hell whenever I force myself to write a chapter where Twilight receives, dood.