A gangster from a notorious gang in las vegas ends up in a place he was least expecting. He must then find a way of redemption within 10 weeks before it is too late.
A gangster from a notorious gang in las vegas ends up in a place he was least expecting. He must then find a way of redemption within 10 weeks before it is too late.
Honestly, this has a great premise (a mafia brony is defiantly unique)but I would recommend a pre-reader to check for grammar and IMO this was a little too long for a first chapter but again just my opinion.
Shorty, NOOOOOOOOOOOOooooooooooooooooooo..........
I have to admit, this is kind of interesting. I'll be keeping an eye on this.
3404551 Yeah, sorry my grammar isn't the best .
Also, I do agree the chapter is fairly long, buuuut I had to introduce a lot of stuff which would be tied into the story later on.