• Member Since 25th Oct, 2013
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SingingSeaSerpent


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A gangster from a notorious gang in las vegas ends up in a place he was least expecting. He must then find a way of redemption within 10 weeks before it is too late.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 3 )

Honestly, this has a great premise (a mafia brony is defiantly unique:moustache:)but I would recommend a pre-reader to check for grammar and IMO this was a little too long for a first chapter but again just my opinion.

Shorty, NOOOOOOOOOOOOooooooooooooooooooo.......... :raritydespair:

I have to admit, this is kind of interesting. I'll be keeping an eye on this. :eeyup:

3404551 Yeah, sorry my grammar isn't the best :fluttershyouch:.

Also, I do agree the chapter is fairly long, buuuut I had to introduce a lot of stuff which would be tied into the story later on. :yay:

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