The Doctor in Equestria

This is probably like every Doctor Whooves on this site, except he's not a pony. The TARDIS crashes in Equestria destroying some of Sweet Apple Acres along the way. Like any other Doctor Who story he's there for a reason all he has to do is find it.

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LunarRai

LunarRai #1 · Oct 14th, 2013 · · · Ch. 1 Night-mares ·

Slow down there, buddy.
Your story's moving way too fast; there's a lot of telling and not much showing.

nighters

nighters #2 · Oct 14th, 2013 · · · Ch. 1 Night-mares ·

this happen so fast i was like what? i think the main six reaction would be more angry or superstitious of the doctor for his alien and blue box add the fact of the nightmare's i thought they would suspect it was his doing and think he lied the main six felt out of character to the situations i mean he did destroy a good part of apple jack farm and then talk about a bad war that happen and they didn't show much emotion in this story so far then he saved equastria all the sudden from some shadow's feeding on a filly fear and no real reason as to why survival? attempt to conquer? no reason just instinct? did he really save equastria? now he going to leave with the main six with him all the sudden? no letters to princess no good bye to friends and family just drop on the fly leave? i don't think they would be good companions for the doctor at all really... i love the fact you have the doctor being the doctor and not a pony!

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