I love the series. Ever since the show began I have felt the need to mix the musical arts of the show in with my own music. The time's come for me to do just that.
Scootaloo has always been one for adventure, but this shows her first step into doing stuff only older mares get to do. With Rainbow Dash to accompany her on her first night out, Scootaloo gets to see what a night out in Ponyville's Shiny Hooves night club is all about.
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"K" should be 'kay' or 'okay', and I think your brain skipped over your fingers while you were typing, 'cause there's a 'were' missing in the next spot.
Other than those, this is a good'in.
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Thank you for the info! I didn't really want to bother you with this story cause I know you had stuff goin' on, so yeah 
Ahaha I knew about the K thing. I guess I just wanted to be a little lenient with the slang. As for for the were, I have no excuse
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Don't be afraid to come to me with stuff to edit just because I've got my own things. I said I would be your proofreader and editor, and if I have too much on my plate I'll say as much. If it adds to a pile of stuff I have to do, the worst that will happen is maybe it'll bump the day you get your story back a bit, or cause me to hold off writing for a bit longer, which is no problem considered I only write on weekends anyway. Honestly, I'd rather nitpick a story than work on some cruddy Physics homework anyway!
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Good to know! I'll keep that in mind from now on
Alrighty then
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Overall, this was a nice little piece. There are some grammatical errors, but nothing glaring. It was heartwarming enough, but it felt a little sedate. All things considered, it's decent.
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Ahaha thanks!! I will try to improve overall, and I did feel the same way about it. I just need to find that flow in my writing still. Thank you for the feedback though. I really do appreciate it
This story was certainly really interesting! I honestly wish there was more to this story xD
Good job overall!
3284690 My pleasure. Feel free to ask for my opinion anytime.
Good stuff! Well written.
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Thanks!!
i like the pic but it makes this story look depressing, i would suggest finding something more up beat, it especially sad if you read it. its what took me so long to read it
I LOVE THIS STORY! I kind of want a sequel now...