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fluttershylover357


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Rainbow Dash was heading towards Cloudsdale when she noticed something strange. A mare and a stallion, both pegasi, one pink and one indigo, are lying on the ground below her, completely still. The moment she realizes those are her parents.... her life changes.... Forever.

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Comments ( 12 )

Quite good and rather interesting!
I gave you for that!

3278453 Thank you! I am glad you liked it! :twilightsmile:

3292465

I hope you would read my works something! :fluttercry:
I believe you will find them amusing!

3292649 I would love to take a look sometime! I am currently making another fan fiction about Apple Bloom. I hope you check it out once it's published! :pinkiesmile:

3292973

I am more than happy to hear your reply soon :coolphoto:

3292977 I'm so sorry I didn't notice sooner! I have been busy... You know, real life and stuff, and I have started reading your fan fiction! It is really interesting so far... Although I have spotted quite a few grammar issues. Otherwise, I definitely think it is interesting. :yay:

3302836

Darn it! I tried to keep grammar mistakes out as possible. So i would like to know were the grammatical mistakes fatal to my story?

I was also busy to keep up with few AP classes in school so having a little time to write fiction but i am starting to work on chapter 4 now.
I hope to see your reply soon!

3302948 Oh... Well, you see, I thought it was really good... and most of the time I corrected them in my head. If you wanted me to, though, I could fix the grammar errors in the entire fan fic I am currently reading (I think you only wrote one, but just to be sure). I haven't really had many problems with it, I actually thought it was a lot better than mine could ever be. And... I'm sorry I took so long. :ajbemused:

3302959

No problem at all!
Thank you for your advice!

3303192 Um... okay... you're welcome.... I guess.... You can PM me tomorrow on this account around 11:50, I should be on around then. If I don't get back to you for a while.... Just assume I slept in. I really look forward to being your assistant (sort of):raritystarry:

Comment posted by fluttershylover357 deleted Oct 9th, 2013
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