• Published 8th Sep 2013
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Day of the Moon - Next Gen Wonderbolt



Luna goes on a journey of self discovery after finding out from Celestia that she was adopted.

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Epilogue

It was a cool autumn day, the day that had started it all. A dark blue alicorn and her newly adopted daughter walked out of an orphanage. The dark blue filly was smiling big and was levitated onto her mother's back. It was official and the two could not have been happier. The filly looked around, gazing at all the large buildings, even though she had seen them before in the summer. The trees had their leaves painted a variation of red, yellow, and orange. The breeze sprinting through the air, snatching leaves from their branches and making them dance. The filly stuck her face up into the breeze and closed her eyes, the feeling of the wind was exhilarating!

Her mother rolled her eyes and giggled, she made her way down to the train station, the sun was just past it's high point in the sky and was focusing down on the pair. They knew where they were going, and they had already moved to their new home. They stood together as the train came rolling into the station, the brakes hissing like snakes as they slowed the vehicle. The two ponies handed the conductor their tickets and boarding the train. They both looked back at the large castle in the distance, the place where it had all began. As the train jerked forward and the two departed for home, the sun aimed itself on an item in the brush. The object glinted and caught the eye of a passing bystander. The pony looked closer at the item in the brush that was winking at him.

The clarity of the object was increased and the item was identified. In the brush of the bush was a long forgotten item, one that would not be remembered.

It was a dark blue tiara.

Author's Note:

So damn, not much of an epilogue but I wanted it to be seperate from the story cause why not. This is the official end of the story! YAY right? I just wanted to say thanks to every one who read this and to everyone who commented and gave some feedback. I honestly did not expect this to do as well as it is. Just thank you to everyone and I hope you enjoyed my little tale. Thoughts on the story as a whole now, would be greatly appreciated! And I am NOT repeat NOT going to advertise my other stories on here, oh...whoops. Anyway, thank you all and I hope you are having a fantastic day.

MPulse :3

Comments ( 11 )

i love the epilogue a lot and can you make a sequel for this story

3254792 I don't know yet. I have no idea what the sequel would really be about. :unsuresweetie: We'll just have to wait and see. :twilightsmile:

3254799
The first thing that comes to mind would be seeing Luna and Crescent settling into Ponyville, getting to know people. Slice-of-life stuff.

3254799 ok and can you could make a sequel about Crescent growing up and make friends and doing stuff with her new family and friends

3254873 yeah please do that

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Yeah, for a sequel.

Now, as for the story, it was well done. A nice journey with a satisfying conclusion.
There's just something about the tiara representing the past that makes me feel mixed. I know this goes into philosophy and all that, but I've always seen the past as something to hold on to. Not to obsess over, but to learn from. Your past is just as much a part of you as the future is, if not more so.

3254906 Well, sometimes you need to forget the past to move on. That was what I was trying to convey in that last part. If it's confusing I apologize. :twilightblush:

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