It's that time of year where the snow is plentiful and ponies love to spend Hearth's Warming next to a warm fire. Twilight Sparkle has nothing planned for this Hearth Warming, nothing except a show and an evening filled with Applejack and her efforts to make sure she has a great time!
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This is great! :) Can't wait to read more, even though I don't ship TwiJack, lol xD
3409146 thnx! Means a lot cause im not very confident when writing romance fics.
Looks promising
3409204 I would hope so.
3409236 -shrugs- Imma a sucker for sum flustered Twi.
3409238 Same.
I, as a purveyor of fine Twijack stories, must admit that you have quite the delicious story here. Not perfect or particularly innovative, but for a first attempt it's much better than most shipping stories I've read.
3409392 Thnx! Means alot.
3409402
Nope, I now hate you and this story because you just said alot. Go cry in a corner you filthy grammar maggot!
(
I still love you in a totally non creepy way. 
)
3409455 Maybe I will! Lol
not bad. not bad at all. kinda fast paced, but other then that, i liked it.
3415774 Thnx.
Don't mind me just waiting for the NEXT DAMN CHAPTER!!!!!!
3612622 Don't mind me but I have SCHOOL AND BASKETBALL GOING ON! I'm getting to it as fast as I can! Patience my friend. Tell ya what, I'll release it Friday.
3615076 oh a challenge for yourself nice and also oooops didn't mean to hit a nerve
3615364 It's fine.
I'm trying my best to get it done but school and basketball take up my free time. But I'm getting it done asap. 
This was just as good as the first one.Just wished the truth or dare went on a bit longer but whatever.
3729304 Thank you
That was very sweet.
4221106 Thank you
And so concludes one of the greatest Twijack/Applelight fic ever. Now all we need is a clopfic of this.
Finally an update! I've been waiting for this to update like forever!
Sweet chapter and perfect ending!
4223289 Yeah. Sorry about that
laziness and sports got the better of me.
4223026 Thank you
4223311
Oh, it's ok,cuz you finished it, right?
4223341 Well I hadn't planned on a sequel so yes I would say it's done
4223345
Yep
I follow you know, because I obviously didn't ?!
I couldn't even rember that you were the writer if the story, to be honest...
But now I'll be following you so that I don't miss anything!
4223376
Well I was gone for a very long time. and thank you for the follow! :)
4223379
Yes, yes you was! Did you by any chance change your avatar?
NP
4223392 About 4 or 6 times
4223399
Explains it!
The one I remember was - crystal Rarity?
4223427 Yeah. Identity Crisis then an Avatar crisis
4223442
Oh, that explains it!
D'aaaaawwwww
"Whatever happened next would determine the fate of Equestria. Ok not that serious"
I was worried for a sec....
4239181 Glad you enjoyed it!
Its nice, but it does not feel complete due to Applejack revealing the problems with home. This needs a sequal, put off the complete list to complete or eliminate the section that Applejack is worried, suggesting Granny Smith will be alright with it and it would feel more complete.
4253947 Thanks for the input. Sadly there will not be a sequel. Sorry to disappoint.
~Xela
4254023
So there will be no sequal, then will it be edited or be left as is to make the story feel more complete.
4254096 I don't see why it should be edited just so you can be satisfied.
4254115
Don't have, just a suggestion.
4254179 I'll take note of it when writing other stories. This was just a contest entry that went rogue in a way
So I'm about to start reading this story, and there is a chance this typo is on purpose, so sorry if I'm jumping the gun. Grammatically the title should read "An Honest Hearth".
It is a common misconception that a is used before a word beginning with a consonant and an is used before a word beginning with a vowel. In reality, a is used before a word beginning with a consonant sound and an is used before a word beginning with a vowel sound. Hence an hour, not a hour. Or a universal truth, not an universal truth.
I promise I will make up for this grammar comment with a story based comment when I finish reading what is posted.
5468945 It's ok
While AN honest hearth sounded better, A Honest Hearth is usually how I would associate grammar spelling. Looks like the education system hath failed me.