• Published 25th Aug 2013
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When We Fall - Princess Twilicorndog



Everyone falls. Some just don't get back up.

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After

“Did I pass Celestia, did I? I tried so very hard, and Spike’s worried that I’ll go all psycho on him if I fail. But I won’t, will I?”

Princess Celestia gently smiled at her beloved student, her favorite pony in all of the world. “Of course you did, Twilight. I couldn’t be more proud.”

Twilight hopped towards her beloved mentor, her favorite pony in all of the world. “Oh goody! I just knew I would pass! And now Sombra can never ever bother anyone ever again!” She gave Celestia a hug and eagerly ran outside, the day tinged orange.

Her six best friends had been waiting for her. Of course silly Rainbow had been flying around, but she came down to earth as soon as Twilight exited the castle. “I passed with flying colors!”

All of her friends grinned, and Spike rushed up to hug her legs. “We all knew you would!” The baby dragon exclaimed.

Twilight giggled as Canterlot Castle burned behind her, the ever-preserved bodies of her best friends surrounded her.

“I just know we’ll all be best friends forever, girls!”

The screams of dying ponies echoed throughout Canterlot as Twilight hugged the corpses of the friends she had murdered herself.

Author's Note:

Oops
That got dark.
I honestly didn't plan this, it just sort of happened...

Comments ( 4 )

Well that escalated quickly

Oh, forgot to add into the A/N, if you want to add any constructive criticism, that would be greatly appreciated. One of my biggest problems is rushing things, I know, and I wish to know if anyone feels like this story is rushed.

.........:pinkiecrazy: I should have blown up equestria

:pinkiesick: I feel sick on chapter 2
Chaosmaster is My OC in my future story.

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