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4 AND 5!? WOOT! You are amazing!
fantastic
I ever tell you I love you,Dre?
So fluttershy realized she was a lesbian?interesting,interesting...
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No, no, not quite. It's complicated, and I'll be expanding on it further in later chapters, but for now Rarity is basically just trying to help her get her self-confidence going. It, uh, just so happens that I happen to like the Rarishy ship. No relation, I assure you...:*cough cough*
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I love you too, Sig. What can I say? I have that effect on people.
Damn, was hoping for a threesome in this chapter. Oh well maybe in a later one.
this part is awesome Fluttershy is best
but this is a great set up i wonder how this whole situation is going to work out
possible threesome ... hey a pony can dream
Yeah for some reason I thought there would be a threesome... But that cant be right... ANYWAY! Freaking excellent double update, Fluttershys part was the best in this one throwing out that Bch... Finally read it after me slacking all day, well worth the wait! Eagerly awaiting more.
*Rarity kisses Fluttershy*
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"What, you mean Elephant Excretions?" i pissed myself laughing. Excellent work! Keep it up.
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I'm sensing a pattern here...
No threesome for this chapter (or two chapters, rather), I'm afraid, I was just introducing the side-story. I always like to give a reason for what happens in the story; whereas most pseudo-clopfics are like "here's a few characters yada yada AND THEN THEY FUCKED. THE END.", I like to give a set-up for it. Then when it does happen, you feel something about it.
You know, besides that feeling. Just sayin'.
Not to say that it can't happen, of course...I'd just like to build up for it.
Everyone knows the best release is the one that you've been waiting for
352721 *Reading your post* Yeah totaly agree, there are to many of those out there, and not enough storys with a actual plot... Though I am tracking about 200ish fics, half of which are non-sense.
*Scrolls down* "Not to say it can't happen" eh? My Jedi senses proove usef-
*Looks at last line* No comment.
D'awww! Poor fluttershy! Can't imagine how freaked out she must be, but at the same time comforted, a tad drunk, and most likely a little... excited. And on top of the days emotions... Geez
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Okay, two chapters... I'm prepared to let my review/praise gland run out of liquefied verbal excretions. Hopefully you haven't gotten bored of my comments quite yet!
So anyway, the drama in chapter 4 was excellently done. It has improved a lot from the first time we had drama in this and it feels a lot more involving.
The romance and connections have stayed in their position of 'very great', I'm still waiting for some Rarity vs. Cashmere super-drama to comment on.
I also like how you did Cheerilee's dialogue.
Same goes for Fluttershy. And speaking of Fluttershy... I didn't see that coming. That side plot came totally out of the left field... And believe me, when you manage to create a scene that NOBODY sees coming, and still have it feel completely natural without it disrupting the story at all, you KNOW you've done a great job.
With just 5 chapters you've already come up as my favorite artist on this site. Keep up the exquisite work.
With this chapter being my favorite so far, I can't wait for the next one.
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>I'm prepared to let my review/praise gland run out of liquefied verbal excretions
That's dedication, right there. Dedication of a possibly sticky nature, but dedication none-the-less!
Good to know the drama between characters is being done properly, that's always my biggest concern. Trying to, say, have an argument without it coming across as cliche is always a challenge. I'll have a big Rarity vs Cashmere Rumble In The Jungle (or fashion store, whatever) soon enough. Currently planning out the next chapter.
So yeah, the Fluttershy thing...I think I rewrote that scene a good five or six times before I was happy with it. As I said in another comment, it's something I've wanted to include since I first started writing this story, but I forced myself to be patient about it and only put it in when it felt appropriate to do so. I'm glad to see it worked! With the protagonist's back story mostly complete (though there's details here and there I'll expand upon), I wanted to introduce a secondary story line. Hence, Rarity and Fluttershy having that moment together. Just from the show, it always seemed to me that Rarity and Fluttershy would be a good match; they're always spending time together, and they seem to have a history that goes a ways back. So, shipping goggles on, I'm gonna see where I can take it from here.
Always appreciate your feedback, Amppi!
Well, that was an awesome chapter! YAY for awkward relationships between main characters! Can't wait for the next update.
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Thanks for the kind words, Patrick. That's exactly what I've been going for! I'm working on the sixth chapter as I type this, I think you guys will enjoy it when it's finished.
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That was too cute for words. (That shipping is the best.)
(I got mugged at knifed point and now recovering from a few cuts here and there and I had some free time) I was bored waiting so I made Cashmere
My dA account.
you like?
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You made that? Really?
Holy Celestia, that's amazing! That's way better than what I could have made. Definitely what I pictured Cashmere looking like, I love the expression on her face. Thanks, Razz!
Did you really get mugged at knife point? Wow. Crazy, man. At least you're okay.
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yes indeed
took me few days (Time taken about 18 hours) I just Had to give her a smug look
meh I live in the ghetto kinda not the 1st time its happend only a knife came up this time im fine
also I just wanna talk about the manticore(elephant?) in the room......
365178 her horn looks kinda small doesn't it?
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ya I'm better at wings and blank manes this was my first unicorn so use to doing earth ponies and such but if you remember in the story "her horn barely pokes out from between her bouncy head of hair"
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Well that's because of her hair being so poofy, not because her horn is small. Still, if you imagine the horn as being mostly obscured by her hair, then it looks fine. Besides, it's a minor detail, I think it looks great. It's my desktop image
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Thanks for the kind words, Romuluzz. Nice choice of avatar pic there, too, lol.
I think my story gets better as it goes on; the early chapters, especially the first chapter were just my attempt to get a 'feel' down for this story. Kind of a "throw it at the wall and see what sticks" sort of situation.
Writing something as intimate as a sex scene always proves challenging, but it really was something I wanted to include from the start. As I've said before, there are so many stories out there that just turn sex into this...routine. You know what I mean? It's like "Part A goes into Part B", like you're reading Ikea instructions. There's no emotion there, there's no reason for it to be happening, it's just there. I like to spread any sex scenes out, so that they're not a constant thing, and so that when they do happen, you really feel for the characters. I think I did that especially well in later chapters.
And yes, once I finish this story (whenever that is, lol) I plan on writing many more, with all kinds of narrative styles and kinds of stories. So, we'll see where it goes from here!
I read this story to this song and I won't lie. I feel dirty.
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I take it you mean you had this song in your head, probably during the 'grand opening' scene? I love Deadmau5, I had to give him a shout-out.
376128 wow i feel like an idiot. the post has been corrected!
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Y U NO Gimme i coolor! didn't know what to give him for eye color so i gave him a "I am disappoint"
ENJOY!
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D'oh. I never did mention eye color, did I? I can solve that. Gimme a few minutes and I'll post a touched-up image.
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DAMN you up just as early as me you watchin some pony today? so was I, REGRET NOTHING! I was a little lazy never made the cutie mark kinda fell off after the vest was made
Here we go. Added the cutie mark and eye color, hopefully the eye is the right size. Stallions always look weird to me.
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Once again, I'm amazed you made this for my humble little story. I'm flattered, I really am. Brohoof to you, good sir.
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Man, I NEVER sleep, lol. I am such a damn insomniac. It's almost 6am here, and I'm not tired. So, what better way to pass time than pony?
If I'm not writing pony, I'm watching pony, or posting pony, or playing TF2 with pony mods. Awww yeah.
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You game TF2? whats ya steam im still kinda new to the game how bout you?
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I'm a TF2 addict, I've been playing for a year now. I mostly go Spy, it's my favorite class, but I off-class Medic if the team needs it, or Scout. I love that game, I've got, oh...
*checks steam*
379 hours played, haha
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Hot damn you like TF2. I've added you on Steam (under focusknock) in case you wanna play anytime or just generally chat. (apologies if that sounds desperate)
I have to say, this is one of my favourite fics. I check back every day, and then I reread it all again. Partly because I am a sucker for romance and and partly because it's Rarity. I'm eager to see how it turns out for the two characters and will be dawwing with much enthusiasm.
Is it just me, or ate you giving nods to other stories in here? The way the "magical creatures act" was mentioned reminds me of "Preggity" ( which was a fabulous story, btw). I personally think that these kind of nods really help the community. Personally I've noded to threes company, allergeza, the way to a unicorn's heart and a couple more.
Also, please ignore my grammar and spelling mistakes, I'm typing on my iPhone after about 6 shots. I can't be bothered to pay attention to it.
And Rarity is best pony.
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That I am! I've tried to slip in little references here and there, including, but not limited to Fallout: Equestria, It's Dangerous Business, Going Out Your Door, Preggity (though tbh, I couldn't finish the story once it slipped into the really bizarre fetish stuff), some of TAW's stuff, and a bunch of random fics whose name I can't remember. Always happy to see someone find those little nods, I think it helps the community feel more coherent.
And yes, Rarity is definitely best pony.
She doesn't get the chance to finish the sentence. Before she can even react, Fluttershy picks her up with a loud growl of annoyance, flies through the open door, and unceremoniously dumps her into a mud puddle. She rushes back in and slams the door behind her, huffing deeply with adrenaline and emotion.
YES! This is the best assertive fluttershy I've seen in a LONG time, if ever! such WIN!
And now you introduce the possibility of polygamy!
This is the best fanfic I have ever read, thx for sharing your talent
My head while reading this chapter:
Reading this chapter I... sympathize with Fluttershy so very much.
No chance of a kiss from Rarity though. Drat!
yes fluttershy let the friendship (that caused hate) flow through you
you know angel could be coerced into helping them out in gorilla tactic fashion war fare.....just saying
FLUTTERSHY IS THE MAN! YEEAH!
GET OUT!<-----That right their, is the pinnacle of awesomeness that is deemed flutterage. ever been to tartarus? they know of this, and it turns their minds into puddles of fear.
I've been reading through this story slowly now (not because I haven't been enjoying it but because of the long chapters) and I have enjoyed everything so far. Well written, great pace (although it does then to drag on occasion) and you've written the characters very well.
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And then I stumbled across this...
Please tell me I'm not going to stumble across a RDxAJ pairing. Thats nearly as bad as RDxTwi (that relationship would never bloody work)
Well that was an interesting development.
Fluttershy went HULK on Cashmere
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2766431 holy shit! I was expecting she-hulk!