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BOOYA, NEW CHAPTER!
There's some good happenings in this chapter. I like.
Progressssssss
Ponies are light weights that's for damned sure... Now this was another enjoyable read, though Can You make Whiskey sours with Limes? I thought it was with lemons...
Another great chapter, and you really love teasing us with that 3-way action. (sorry I don't have a human emoticon)
I know your chapters are HUGE but I find myself getting anxious for another chapter after about 5 days without one
"Yes, special like a barking pony."
that made me laugh
*Grins at the upcoming three-way, then frowns at the ending*
FUCK!
*Tosses the computer and walks away.*
not exactly AJ's slang of the south "darlin" sweetie or something along the lines im just say in is all , that and im alittle usure of what i did to a friend in this kinda situation half drunk shes riling up ready to go but i did the manly thing and didnt continue last month i used the my little dashie fic and screwed around with her emotions and did the uncle nasty show is that fucked up or is it just me?
Awww! Soooo close!
I pretty good chapter, I found a grammatical error somewhere near the middle
Oh I don't know, Cashmere...I'd say lifting your for tail for anypony with a coin pouch
counts as plenty of 'fucking around',wouldn't you?"
You have to hide a laugh behind your fist,genuinely impressed by Rarity's reply.
You sure know how to keep us wanting more I was getting into it then suddenly BAM haha keep it up I love it.
Seriously though this is definitely my absolute favorite fic even beating out Romance Reports and The Scootaloo Diaries which are both amazing.
Keep up the good work.
Wow, what a tease ending.
Also, when Rarity put on her scarf, I couldn't stop thinking that any second now she'd start doing this:
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Anyway. Every single time I happen to read one of my old comments before reading a chapter (It helps me with reviewing. I know what to look for and see what's improved), I think that I might have exaggerated your characterization abilities. Then after reading the chapter, I once again realize that what I'm saying is not even enough. You're GOOD! What was going trough my head about Cashmere's compliments and threats in the start was the same as our protagonists. You've managed to make a very involving protagonist, and beautifully well written antagonist. There's nothing I appreciate more than a well written antagonist, and yours is just perfect.
I also like how you wrote Applejack's and Dash's lines. Appeared very in character. There also seems to be at least something going on between those two... If there is, I don't mind. I like Appledash.
Also, drunk Rarity is hilarious.
The ending scene was also well done. They seemed appropriately drunk, and the dialogue felt realistic. I also like how they didn't end up doing it, since that would seem out of place, given their feelings about the situation earlier.
The bar itself was also well written. I could really imagine myself being there.
All in all, fantastic. You've managed to surprise me yet again with your wizardry skills.
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D'oh! Gotta fix that. Thanks for pointing it out!
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Indeed you can, I always do. I like the flavor more that way, too.
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Teasing a threesome is so much fun.
SO MUCH FUN
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What? 'Darlin' is a southern thing, through and through. Where did you get Sweetie from? She doesn't even have an accent...unless you count a frequently-cracking voice as an accent
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Heya, Amppi. I'll be honest, I thought of that image too, lol.
If you worry about exaggerating my characterizations, then I really worry about messing them up! Every single chapter I write, I kinda sit back and wonder if it's good enough, if everything came across properly. Feels good to have some confirmation after it's posted, that's for sure.
Cashmere is always fun to write for, and since the kid gloves are off now she's going to start hitting hard. What, exactly, that entails, I'm still deciding, but it'll be more than what we've seen so far. Either way, it'll be fun to write (and read, hopefully).
Appledash is one of my favorites, too
That ending scene, man...I spent a good hour, at least, trying to figure out how to get it across. I wanted to tease that threesome while still having the reader feel unsure of whether it should be happening at all in their current condition. Judging by the responses, I think I did okay.
Thanks for your feedback, as always
Nice. But you're killing me now, SO CLOSE TO THREESOME! Gah...Damn alcohol sometimes
Damn, I got TWO dislikes in one day! Though considering I haven't had a dislike since the very first day I posted this story, I'm not exactly concerned.
Oh no! Whatever shall I think of 162 likes and 3 dislikes?
Love it. Urf, missed three-way!
Drunk Rarity is awesome. Cursing ponies are awesome. Therefore, this fic is awesome!
Ah, I see our protagonist can think with the big head even while under the influence. Well played, sir. (I was expecting something along those lines. Don't see what all the crying is about. )
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"What, exactly, that entails, I'm still deciding, but it'll be more than what we've seen so far."
Jeez, after our protagonist's thoughts at the bar and AJ's comments, I thought you were trying to foreshadow something (not going to spell it out just in case). I thought I saw a big red flag waving around, anyway.
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Oh believe me, I AM foreshadowing something...I'm just not entirely sure what that something is
562812 just realized that on my original comment I had a grammatical error
Revision: I thought it was a pretty good chapter for story progression, also I almost cried from the teaser at the end
Keep it up!
Ug appledash. Please don't.
I swear to God this fic is gonna give me diabetes one day. Not concerned enough to stop reading it though.
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Relax, it was just a silly reference. I'm not gonna turn this into an Appledash story, sheesh.
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Thank goodness, i don't think i could take that.
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Though I might just do one in the future, I quite like that pairing
You horrible tease you :D
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You know you love it
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*LE GASP*
You hate appledash too?!
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(⌐■_■)
YEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!
565452 I would respond properly, but that would make things awkward between us
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Now i wouldnt go so far as to say hate, but it's one of the few ships that just can't work without SIGNIFICANT character development.
Rainbow and AJ are great for a quick roll in the hay, but a stable long-term relationship just won't work, no matter how i analyse it.
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Ah, indeed. You sir, have very good reasoning skills.
But really though, I would go as far as saying I hate it.
Because I do. There's so much of it, too.
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Ah, that first comment by Amppi. I think you misunderstood. The very first comment I ever got on this story was from a completely insufferable prick, who hated it simply because it was a clopfic. He was also the only one to give me a thumb down for nearly three months.
Amppi was responding to him. Make no mistake, Amppi has been the single biggest help to me thus far. He's a stand-up kinda guy.
Spelling errors and misplaced words will pop up from time to time, but I do my best to stamp them out. I am a stickler for proper spelling and grammar, trust me. That said, when I type out 10k+ words per chapter, I tend to miss one or two.
Oh, and the story isn't done, lol. I still have a ways to go! Glad you've enjoyed it thus far, I've put a lot of time into it. And yeah, I try to keep the sex scenes intimate and erotic, instead of gross and messy. Way too many fics want to describe sex like a freakin' porno.
Thanks for the kind words, there's more to come from me in the future for sure.
As always... EPIC CHAPTER BRO!
What this story really needs...is more readers!
569987 oh my bad! i guess i should read comments a bit more thorough! i can not wait for more chapters you have absolutely hooked me to this!
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Thanks! I try my best.
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[spy] BUT OF COURSE.[/spy]
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Wow, I just read all 11 chapters back to back over the course of a day. I feel the withdrawal kickin' in...
I honestly haven't read a fanfic this engrossing since Fallout Equestria, and I almost like that story more than the actual series.
*thumbs up, favorite, watch*
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11 chapters in one day? Wow. That's some dedication right there! I'm flattered that you find it so engrossing, considering that I'd...consider...Fallout: Equestria to be the best damn fanfic I've ever read. That whole thing was just amazing.
I'm working on chapter 12 as we speak, so it should be out in the next couple of days. Thanks for reading my story
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I'm definitely looking forward to it
But yeah Fallout Equestria is just in its own league, its a friggin book to be honest. I may be biased from being a fallout fan for the last 13 years, but I'd buy a hardcover copy in a heartbeat.
I must say, I'm still worried about the three-way relationship here. Having your girlfriend suddenly bring someone into your relationship without much discussion? It's just.. iffy. I know I'd feel a lot more negativity towards the situation, but our protagonist has a tad more confidence in the relationship, I suppose. Still, I feel like he's not showing enough concern for the issues that Fluttershy brings to the relationship. I know he's shown some slight concern over the last few chapters, but it feels like he's a bit too content. Attempting to create a three-way relationship, in reality (derp), is a big, chaotic mess of conflicting emotions. And his love has sprung this on him the moment he's decided to marry her?
I'm waiting for shit to hit the fan. I'm actually hoping it does, as anything else would seem unrealistic.
I'm sorry if this seems too negative, I really do love and enjoy this story. I'm just venting some misgivings that have been mulling around as I've read this.
Your characterization has been lovely. I can hear Rarity's voice in my head whenever I read your work, so good job.
The relationship has been very fun to read. I just smile whenever I open up a chapter.
Thanks for all of your hard work on this story. I don't mean to sound negative about it, I love it. This story is the reason I registered for this site, so I could follow it.
And.. as an off-topic note: Do you play TF2 on a LoP server? Because there's a Spy named Drefsab that kills me. A lot.
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I understand the concern, and I hope I can put your mind at ease a bit when I say that the Fluttershy side-plot is something that I have planned out in great detail. There will be highs and lows...when those happen, I won't say, but I assure you this isn't going to end up as a story element that is simply overlooked in its ramifications.
Trust me, I'm a doctor
And to answer your TF2 question: Yes, that's me, lol. I main Spy nearly all the time, and I'm never on anything but the Hydro and Iceworld LoP servers.
I'll be sure to say hi next time I stab you in the back
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It. Is. On.
Hahahaha! Watching paint dry, head butting a wall, as I have said before your awesome bro
(((Author's Note: No flashback this time, just plenty of current happenings. Thanks for reading!)))
no flashback....
NO FLASHBACK!!!
YOU BASTARD!! i love you stuff. if you ever stop i will sick pinkie on you to make you type more..
Ok this HAS to be a reference to TF2: "charming chapeau." http://wiki.teamfortress.com/wiki/Charmer%27s_Chapeau AmIrite?
887950 Yarr.
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Wait... I have coin pouch...
Does that mean...
I hope it does
A) Over a year and no one has posted this?
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B) I've just realised that this story has been on my read later list....for over a fucking year!
Wonder what's going on in the barn....
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Interesting...
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562274 NYAHA!
glad they stop wile it would of been sweet their drunk one dos not think right when drunk.
Ugh, I didn't get to read a chapter yesterday and only got to read this one today after having to stay longer at work today. It's been so hard... but so worth it when I actually get the chance to breath and unwind with this excellent story. It's all I've been doing when I'm not at work, sleeping, or doing some random task that needs doing. I just want to sit down and read through it all non-stop, but alas, I would regret the decision upon arriving to work in the morning with zero sleep, and probably still wouldn't be done reading the story (I like to take my time it seems).
One specific area that I loved was the Prancing
PonyMare scene (bit of a Lord of the Rings reference there methinks?). Though I like the scene for something that some might not expect. It was specifically the interaction with Barley that really got me. Here you have this simple bartender, where most would just gloss over his presence (and just serve the drinks to the protagonist), you have him a life of his very own. I was able to connect with his struggle of finding the right place to setup shop to earn a living, while grinning at how he remembered the protagonist from the minute mention of their previous outing in an earlier chapter. I also like how the protagonist tipped at the beginning and then told him to keep the change when paying, a real gentleman there.As for the Appledash stuff, I'm cool with it, though I think I lean more towards Rarijack personally. Sorry to have AJ steal your waifu.
At risk of sounding like a broken record, thanks again for such a great story! This probably won't be the last time I say it, fair warning.
EDIT: P.S. pinkie.mylittlefacewhen.com/media/f/img/mlfw10229-369702__safe_rarity_solo_animated_vibrating_wahaha_pink252Bfluffy252Bunicorns252Bdancing252Bon252Brainbows_x252Bintensifies_descriptive252Bnoise.gif