Coming back from graduating Wonderbolts Academy, Rainbow Dash decides to put her newly tuned skills to the test by putting them in action. However, when a mysterious mare appears as a threat to her, Rainbow Dash creates a team of pony heroes to counter the threat... but she might not be the only threat.
Inspired by South Park's "The Coon" trilogy.
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I'm sorry, Chapter 2 is still in progress. I'm trying my best to get around to it, so please look forward to it.
3264778 I look forward to everything you do, Rainy-chan.
Okay, I've read it now, and you could use a proofreader or editor (maybe both) to point out a few issues with your writing before you publish.
But then, you might not be looking for constructive criticism, so I'll shut up.