Twilight invites Applejack to join her and Rainbow Dash in the bedroom, but emotions run high and their agreement turns into something more than anypony intended.
3089747 Goddammit why is there not a picture of Timon with that caption on the internet? What the hell, man? I tried for ten minutes to find one so I could post it all meme style but noooooo.
I wasn't sure before, but now I feel the story is in an awkward place. It feels like it is stuck in between a full on clop and a standard story. I got halfway through the chapter and quit reading because I realized I don't honestly care about what is going on or what is coming next.
Tuesday? Let me check the calendar. Yep Applejack should be by in 5...4...3...2...1... Howdy y'all. Bang of the week.
Thanks for conveying how I perceive the foreseeable future girls.
Really enjoying this story! I do hope they become a herd lol....love the dynamics of the characters as u write them...also...we need more of big jack....lol....
I know I might get hated for this but what if spike is bucking the crusaders and also aj might go from friend with benefits to 3rd marfriend in this story and one more thing what's shy and pinkie up to? I SPEAK FOR US ALL WHEN I SAY MOAR SIR MOAR AMAZING WRITING FROM YOUR FINGERTIPS!!!!
That was a wonderful chapter. For me, the best parta are the portions before and after the love-making. You really get a sense of how their relationship is growing and evolving. That final line just clinches it. On an unrelated note, Spike may be young by some standards, but he's definitely not ignorant; he knows what's up.
Excellent work. Twilight's research finally comes up with something practical I can tell this might be something Twi keeps on her mind from time to time.
3094725 While I can't say that was the "best" part of the chapter, as the clop was quite something, the way Twilight and Rainbow have drawn AJ into their relationship and how that act's deepened their feelings for her have really been handled well. Clop's fine, but it's much better with a superb story thread to keep it together :)
Aaaaand here comes that emotional component I've so been looking forward to. Eeeexcellent.
Not that the sex scenes are BORING, mind you. Far from it, and very well-written to boot. I'm particularly partial to the nuances of Rainbow's control kink playing against her natural personality, or that AJ could very may well have issues with her sense of self being messed with.
It's just that polyamory is such a rare thing to find on Fimfiction beyond mindless clopfics. It's nice for a story to actually think about the issue for once.
“Least Dash means well.” She shook her head. “Anyway, Twi, there a particular reason ya had me get here early? I mean, I do like chattin’ with you; sometimes it feels like you’re the only pony ‘round this town that ain’t crazier'n a loon.”
...Twilight the sanest Pony in town... that's slightly disturbing...
“Honestly, you two are cuter’n anything together, but with how the both of ya can get sometimes, I’m surprised ya haven’t blown up half of Ponyville.”
I'm actually not convinced it exists. While RD's manner in the first chapter was indeed suggestive of someone hesitating to share a secret desire that they're insecure about or unsure of, it also it also fits with someone whose secret desire is to fulfill others' secret desires, which also goes nicely with RD's secret sub-ness. I've known a few people like that, who don't have any specific fetishes they desire for themselves, but get off on knowning they're serving someone else's fetish.
That pretty much sums up this chapter. Filled with awesomeness. And other "fillings", really~
And it begins. Start the clock and let's see how long it takes them before they ask AJ to join them permanently.
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Nah, just another kind of "filling of awesomeness."
Oh, and Bats? I love you. Futa is best.
and the new feelings begin...
Another awesome chapter, I gotta say. I'm looking forward to when they eventually realize what's happening.
and twilight mixxed up the spells...
Epic, Epic, Epic ^^ I loved it ^^ And RD and Twi are starting to think about AJ, hi hi hi...
This was a hot one, THAT'S for sure.
~Skeeter The Lurker
And it starts!!!!!
Great chapter!! and I loved the ending bit. the story is really coming along!
How do you those emoticons?
3089191 They have to have their freakouts first.
3089747 Goddammit why is there not a picture of Timon with that caption on the internet? What the hell, man? I tried for ten minutes to find one so I could post it all meme style but noooooo.
I wasn't sure before, but now I feel the story is in an awkward place. It feels like it is stuck in between a full on clop and a standard story. I got halfway through the chapter and quit reading because I realized I don't honestly care about what is going on or what is coming next.
Tuesday?
Let me check the calendar. Yep Applejack should be by in 5...4...3...2...1...
Howdy y'all.
Bang of the week.
Thanks for conveying how I perceive the foreseeable future girls.
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You missed the end of the chapter then. And being a prereader, there's more to come~
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After I was back to the computer I went ahead and just skimmed through to the end which is why I said it is stuck between being two worlds.
I think the author's notes are the best part of this story.
Well, shit. I skim the clop, but now I feel the need to RE-skim to know what the three were. I only counted two...
Also, gotta love the tl;dr's.
Still not seeing where Twi got three from. D:
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Umm, I'm sorry?
3090517 It needed to be there but the internet failed me!
And then meme generator didn't wanna work, thus failing me as well!
3090461 There were two. Twilight was trying to instigate a round three. AJ was telling her that, for her, it would be round four.
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Hugs
Great, I like this fic
Really enjoying this story! I do hope they become a herd lol....love the dynamics of the characters as u write them...also...we need more of big jack....lol....
Yesh! The chapter I've been waiting for.
I had a feeling that's what Twi was researching.
And that ending. Twi and Dash just need some continuous orange nuzzle therapy.
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...math.
I know I might get hated for this but what if spike is bucking the crusaders and also aj might go from friend with benefits to 3rd marfriend in this story and one more thing what's shy and pinkie up to?
I SPEAK FOR US ALL WHEN I SAY MOAR SIR MOAR AMAZING WRITING FROM YOUR FINGERTIPS!!!!
But.... this is my fetish too... I guess I can always re-read this chapter again.
This chapter made me wish I could favorite this story again.
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I don't know why you think you'll get hated for that... hell that's been what I'm expecting since the beginning.
Now I'm really wondering what RD's secret fetish is. Knowing that there was futa coming up, i figured that's what it was. But now I've got no guesses.
That was a wonderful chapter. For me, the best parta are the portions before and after the love-making. You really get a sense of how their relationship is growing and evolving. That final line just clinches it. On an unrelated note, Spike may be young by some standards, but he's definitely not ignorant; he knows what's up.
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Lesbian sex is great, but futa lesbian sex is greater
And Spike x CMC is thirded!
Excellent work. Twilight's research finally comes up with something practical I can tell this might be something Twi keeps on her mind from time to time.
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While I can't say that was the "best" part of the chapter, as the clop was quite something, the way Twilight and Rainbow have drawn AJ into their relationship and how that act's deepened their feelings for her have really been handled well. Clop's fine, but it's much better with a superb story thread to keep it together :)
Yes. Yes it was
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By the way, I seem to recall promising you, specifically, futa goodness once upon a time.
Obligation fulfilled?
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:tacklehug: Very much so!
I found a problem with this story.
AJ is a southerner, and southerner's can't be gay or homosexual or whatever it's called this week.
Aaaaand here comes that emotional component I've so been looking forward to. Eeeexcellent.
Not that the sex scenes are BORING, mind you. Far from it, and very well-written to boot. I'm particularly partial to the nuances of Rainbow's control kink playing against her natural personality, or that AJ could very may well have issues with her sense of self being messed with.
It's just that polyamory is such a rare thing to find on Fimfiction beyond mindless clopfics. It's nice for a story to actually think about the issue for once.
This story is batshit insane-
*Glances at author tag*
Oh. Carry on then.
Come and beg us for more...
We've been waiting for you...
Where the kisses are hers and hers and hers!
Three's company too.
Come and make a mess on our floor
(and our walls and our roof..... )
We've a salacious space that needs your face,
Three's company too.
You'll drink plenty of fluids
A stallion we'll make out of you......
Saturday rendez-vous,
Three's company, too!
UPDATEEEEEEEEEE
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Expect one (hopefully) this week. If not this week, then (a massive sized) one next week.
Excellent as always. A little extra unorthodox in this chapter, I think. Must go to sleep now, unfortunately 0_o
Carry on! Thank you
L Awesome Story so far!!!!
3112676 Evidence, please.
I think several dozen cookies is a little bit to Much
...Twilight the sanest Pony in town... that's slightly disturbing...
Indeed.
Nice chapter, good work.
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Go fuck yourself.
Sincerely,
Every LGBT southerner ever.
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I'm actually not convinced it exists. While RD's manner in the first chapter was indeed suggestive of someone hesitating to share a secret desire that they're insecure about or unsure of, it also it also fits with someone whose secret desire is to fulfill others' secret desires, which also goes nicely with RD's secret sub-ness. I've known a few people like that, who don't have any specific fetishes they desire for themselves, but get off on knowning they're serving someone else's fetish.
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amen
I am loving these TL;DR bits at the end of every chapter
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