Twilight invites Applejack to join her and Rainbow Dash in the bedroom, but emotions run high and their agreement turns into something more than anypony intended.
4139321 there should be a turn of events where aj snecks in everynight and leaves i mean hell its winter you need some body heat from two mares that love you come on you know you want to
Disappointment and guilt warred on Rainbow’s face, meeting somewhere in the middle with a look of nausea. “…Whatever you two want.”
You son of a... I need a dimensional portal and a crowbar. Now.
Leaning forward, Twilight nuzzled into her neck and she closed her eyes, returning the affection. Her tone dropped as she mumbled, “I get it, Twi. I fe—” Her throat seized up on her. She swallowed. “I’m—” She hugged Twilight around the shoulders to keep her hooves from shaking. “I…really liked being with Applejack, too.”
Say it, bitch! What the fuck is wrong with your brain!? What could possibly go bad in this situation!? You have literally nothing to lose!
This story is amazing and I was thrilled to see it had updated. The new chapter did not disappoint and emotions have reached yet another climax. I just hope Rainbow Dash and Applejack find some way of confessing their own secret feelings, now that Twilight has done so. It would be a sad ending if they just burried things and went back to monogami when all three of them could be together. I'm a sucker for harem endings.
Come on AJ! Ya should have been as forthcoming as Twi, and Rainbow needs to get her head out of her preverbal clouds of denial. These three are gonna make things so awkward in the near future for themselves. Time to get out the popcorn and wait for the other shoe to drop.
i love logic. somehow all three parties thinking "i am starting to love these two we should stop" is painful to watch. i thought Dash was fearless? and appleack was honest? why is Dash silent and AJ keeping stuff to herself? its hard knowing where its going and not seeing it get there immediately.
Wow you somehow managed to combine a character actually talking about their problems, and a character not spiting it out for no good reason flawlessly and kept it all in character so much that I'm more frustrated with AJ and Dash than with you. Kudos! Love the story, love the chapter, cant wait till someone smacks those two upside the head and we go from:
I just remembered something. Wasn't a threesome not Dash's actual fantasy and just something she said to get Twilight off her case? Are we ever going to find out what it really was? I mean... I guess we need to first go through the awkward relationship mending between all three now, and I'm cool with that. I like the story for the character portrayal and the plot story-line. Anywho, tense chapter, but I look forward to the third act. Hopefully this story is happy end.
okay, actual stuff related to THIS chapter... eh-hum... Ooohhh, sad time feeling for all! Come on Rainbow, just admit your feelings too and we can all have happy carefree hot-as-hell threesome relationship. Oh... I guess I better start placing bets on how long it'll take. I say 3 chapters from now will be happy again. until then, awkwardness and tension... and maybe some tension relieving? -wink wink-
Since people seem to be taking Jake at least semi-seriously, let me say it's not real. Jake's being facetious, playing off how vocal I've been in the past regarding foalcon.
Okay, so I don't think foalcon stuff is evil/needs to be banned/rabblerabblerabble or anything, and I don't have a problem with it existing or being enjoyed by others, but I'm personally sorta creeped out by it. While I can see the artistic and literary value in stories depicting the sexual awakening of younger characters, I find the thought of eroticizing those sorts of experiences unpleasant.
So no, I'm not going to be writing anything like that.
Rainbow's going to be the one to pull them back together... next chapter. And then there will be lots of sexy, sexy make up sex and everything will be okay again forever.
That Spike was perceptive was a nice touch. The interactions and dialogue are very emotional. It's painful and awesome how you wrote that "break up" scene. That both Applejack and Rainbow are repressing just makes it better.
“Twilight, are you having a panic attack?” “Where is it? Where is it?! Spike!” she shouted, flying to another shelf. “Spike! I need help! Where are you?!” “Oh dear, you are panicking.” Fluttershy walked into the kitchen.
Yay! Weekly updates!
Here comes the drama bomb! Duck and cover!
Faust, fucking, damn it!
the feels!!!!!
Well that's alright. Now that Twi admitted it it's only a matter of time till the other two come around!
....are the CMC and spike fucking?
Now that thats out of the way is this the end of aj in the bed room?
I thought that said "boring"
I guess both are true, but I like mine better.
4139321 there should be a turn of events where aj snecks in everynight and leaves i mean hell its winter you need some body heat from two mares that love you come on you know you want to
I think there is something going on between spike and scootaloo. they have had their names used beside one another a few times
You son of a... I need a dimensional portal and a crowbar. Now.
Say it, bitch! What the fuck is wrong with your brain!? What could possibly go bad in this situation!? You have literally nothing to lose!
This story is amazing and I was thrilled to see it had updated. The new chapter did not disappoint and emotions have reached yet another climax. I just hope Rainbow Dash and Applejack find some way of confessing their own secret feelings, now that Twilight has done so. It would be a sad ending if they just burried things and went back to monogami when all three of them could be together. I'm a sucker for harem endings.
that was a little sad. and I am shocked that Dash did not say a word on the matter hen she feels the same, But I am super glad the story is not over!
Come on AJ! Ya should have been as forthcoming as Twi, and Rainbow needs to get her head out of her preverbal clouds of denial. These three are gonna make things so awkward in the near future for themselves. Time to get out the popcorn and wait for the other shoe to drop.
Ah yes, the chapter wherein everything goes terribly, terribly wrong.
And here I was thinking this might be the end. Silly me!
Then again, you have to have the Second Act Breakup, otherwise the story would just be boring.
i love logic. somehow all three parties thinking "i am starting to love these two we should stop" is painful to watch. i thought Dash was fearless? and appleack was honest? why is Dash silent and AJ keeping stuff to herself? its hard knowing where its going and not seeing it get there immediately.
Wow you somehow managed to combine a character actually talking about their problems, and a character not spiting it out for no good reason flawlessly and kept it all in character so much that I'm more frustrated with AJ and Dash than with you.
Kudos!
Love the story, love the chapter, cant wait till someone smacks those two upside the head and we go from:
to:
Dammit Rainbow! Have an opinion, you self-absorbed egotist! Tell'em you fell too and get AJ baaaaack!!!
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Well...
That escalated quickly.
...
*sneaks off to stalk bats*
(Unrelated note - new chapter of 3D is in the works! Rarijackdash fans, don't give up on me yet!)
I just remembered something. Wasn't a threesome not Dash's actual fantasy and just something she said to get Twilight off her case? Are we ever going to find out what it really was? I mean... I guess we need to first go through the awkward relationship mending between all three now, and I'm cool with that. I like the story for the character portrayal and the plot story-line. Anywho, tense chapter, but I look forward to the third act. Hopefully this story is happy end.
okay, actual stuff related to THIS chapter... eh-hum... Ooohhh, sad time feeling for all! Come on Rainbow, just admit your feelings too and we can all have happy carefree hot-as-hell threesome relationship. Oh... I guess I better start placing bets on how long it'll take. I say 3 chapters from now will be happy again. until then, awkwardness and tension... and maybe some tension relieving? -wink wink-
Silly pony...
Who's a silly pony?
You're a silly pony.
Who is?
You is, Purple Smart!
*door gets bucked in*
Who am ah gonna buck so hard their granny feels it?!
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I don't know if this is real ... but there's a big part of me that wants it to be true, at least the first one, TwiBowJack is great
As for my feelings on this chapter, 4139594 echos my thoughts rather succinctly.
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Since people seem to be taking Jake at least semi-seriously, let me say it's not real. Jake's being facetious, playing off how vocal I've been in the past regarding foalcon.
Okay, so I don't think foalcon stuff is evil/needs to be banned/rabblerabblerabble or anything, and I don't have a problem with it existing or being enjoyed by others, but I'm personally sorta creeped out by it. While I can see the artistic and literary value in stories depicting the sexual awakening of younger characters, I find the thought of eroticizing those sorts of experiences unpleasant.
So no, I'm not going to be writing anything like that.
That chapter was pretty agonizing... the way you're taunting us and everything.
Damn you, Bats!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm crying!!!!!!!!!!!!
But I understand the way the three of them are acting. This chapter is perfect, not boring at all.
i can clop to this
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Yeah my reaction to that is adequately summed up in another gif.
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Rainbow's going to be the one to pull them back together... next chapter. And then there will be lots of sexy, sexy make up sex and everything will be okay again forever.
You hear that, Bats?
Everything will be okay again forever.
RAINBOW DASH YOU COWARD
*storms out*
*storms back in*
*storms out again*
That Spike was perceptive was a nice touch. The interactions and dialogue are very emotional. It's painful and awesome how you wrote that "break up" scene. That both Applejack and Rainbow are repressing just makes it better.