Twilight invites Applejack to join her and Rainbow Dash in the bedroom, but emotions run high and their agreement turns into something more than anypony intended.
Dashie just doesn't realize that she has enough love in her heart for two, but I don't blame her for being scared. Twi is not a pony you'd want to risk losing.
this does not look good if Rainbows pulling away from twilight cause what she feels for AJ. Hoping Dash ends up loving them both and not choosing one over the other. But i can understand if that happens though. I hope this wont turn into a big ole mess for all three of them.
so...applejack is in love with dash and twilight, dash is in love with twilight but may also love applejack, and twilight has no idea about any of this...I can dig this plot.
Rainbow, you need to just talk to Twilight. Please! You are Loyalty, you can be loyal to both of them, just as Applejack was honest with herself and admitted to herself she loves both. Please Rainbow, talk to Twilight before it all explodes and ponies get hurt for easily preventable reasons.
Dashie just doesn't realize that she has enough love in her heart for two, but I don't blame her for being scared. Twi is not a pony you'd want to risk losing.
I can't tell if Dash is scared that she's not being loyal and thinking that she shouldn't love them both, or scared that Twilight won't be OK with it (or that she will be), or both. Probably both.
It is not easy to love. While I was reading this page my heart kind of break in two. Maybe it's the things I'm going through now or just the great melancholy you set up. I hope that in the end dash and twi work things out and that AJ will be okay. I have a feeling that before that happens every body(pony) will get hurt.
So worth the wait. Rainbow's feelings are really believable, she very much is the kind of pony who'd keep everything in like that. Tsk, tsk. Well, the truth will have to come out sooner or later. Have I praised this fic enough for its excellent balance between sauciness and intelligent drama? I certainly hope so.
you know, given Twilight's analytical personality, no previous romantic experience, and quick acceptance of inviting someone else into their bedroom, i think she'd be the most in favor of a polyamorous relationship. if she ever figures out what AJ and Dash are going through, she'll probably get all three of them together to work things out, reasoning that if AJ loves both of them, Dash loves her and AJ, and she still loves Dash and trusts AJ enough to let her in on their relationship (unknown how deep her feelings for AJ go yet), they should at least give it a try.
now, dramatically speaking, that wouldn't be the most exciting way to end the story, but as this story has already established, romance doesn't always have to have a bunch of drama attached, right?
Twilight was wrong and there really was a snail invasion that Spike foresaw. The griffons ate them all, sending the griffon civilization into a slow decline while they sat around on the couch, patting their bellies, groaning about how full they felt, and watching Fluffy Kitten Tales.
Meh, it wouldn't be the weirdest thing to ever happen in the series. Point in fact it probably wouldn't even make the top ten...
Rainbow's gonna have to talk at some point and hopefully it's sooner rather then later.
Uuuuh, poor Rainbow. She must be very confused. So many feelings in this chapter.
That was pretty heartbreaking to read by the end.
Dashie just doesn't realize that she has enough love in her heart for two, but I don't blame her for being scared. Twi is not a pony you'd want to risk losing.
this does not look good if Rainbows pulling away from twilight cause what she feels for AJ. Hoping Dash ends up loving them both and not choosing one over the other. But i can understand if that happens though. I hope this wont turn into a big ole mess for all three of them.
Noooo, Rainbow, just talk to her. TALK TO HER!
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>Implying it isn't already a big old mess.
3961726 well i see it right now as on the way to a big mess. but time still to stop things before it erupts
so...applejack is in love with dash and twilight, dash is in love with twilight but may also love applejack, and twilight has no idea about any of this...I can dig this plot.
Things seem to be pretty messy for these two At the moment... And I mean that both literally and and emotionally.
Rainbow, you need to just talk to Twilight. Please! You are Loyalty, you can be loyal to both of them, just as Applejack was honest with herself and admitted to herself she loves both. Please Rainbow, talk to Twilight before it all explodes and ponies get hurt for easily preventable reasons.
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I can't tell if Dash is scared that she's not being loyal and thinking that she shouldn't love them both, or scared that Twilight won't be OK with it (or that she will be), or both. Probably both.
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Definitely all of the above.
that was a bit sad, ok just sad enough for me to understand Dashie. Please Dash, talk to her. Twilight look around, don't be so blind!!!
A mutual love triangle? I'll bite.
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Certainly a sticky situation they're tangled up in.
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Definitely both.
That, and a looming sense of dread that she might be the only one who could outrun the snails.
It is not easy to love. While I was reading this page my heart kind of break in two. Maybe it's the things I'm going through now or just the great melancholy you set up. I hope that in the end dash and twi work things out and that AJ will be okay. I have a feeling that before that happens every body(pony) will get hurt.
So worth the wait. Rainbow's feelings are really believable, she very much is the kind of pony who'd keep everything in like that. Tsk, tsk. Well, the truth will have to come out sooner or later. Have I praised this fic enough for its excellent balance between sauciness and intelligent drama? I certainly hope so.
you know, given Twilight's analytical personality, no previous romantic experience, and quick acceptance of inviting someone else into their bedroom, i think she'd be the most in favor of a polyamorous relationship. if she ever figures out what AJ and Dash are going through, she'll probably get all three of them together to work things out, reasoning that if AJ loves both of them, Dash loves her and AJ, and she still loves Dash and trusts AJ enough to let her in on their relationship (unknown how deep her feelings for AJ go yet), they should at least give it a try.
now, dramatically speaking, that wouldn't be the most exciting way to end the story, but as this story has already established, romance doesn't always have to have a bunch of drama attached, right?
Love the emotional twist at the end bats, and bravo! Loved every chapter so far. Thank you for giving us this magnificent work!
I decided not to read this chapter and was happy that there was a tl;dr.
Seems interesting enough.
lol
Meh, it wouldn't be the weirdest thing to ever happen in the series.
Point in fact it probably wouldn't even make the top ten...