Twilight invites Applejack to join her and Rainbow Dash in the bedroom, but emotions run high and their agreement turns into something more than anypony intended.
Sweet ending. I was hoping AJ would have a slip of the tongue or just represent her element and blurt it out that she loves them. Turns out Rainbow Dash is falling for her. I think this is headed towards a happy threeway relationship, assuming Twilight consents. Looking forward to more.
So obviously next chapter has to have Twilight figure out she's staring to fall for AJ at the end, and then it'll just be a waiting game for who cracks under the pressure first. My guess is Twilight, being under pressure gives her issues.
As usual amazing work, very hot and very beautifully done. So two out of three have realized or almost realized that they are growing feelings for the other. So I'm guessing Twilight is next. I have a very good feeling about what's gonna come up the next couple(hopefully!) of chapters. I can't wait!
Well looks like AJ and Dash are starting to feel more then just being sex buddies. Wonder if Twilight is starting to feel something or if she will still see the arrangement with AJ as nothing more then friends with benefits. I really hope if they try for and actual 3-way relationship they can make it work. But great two chapters
Once again, another great chapter, and my favorite fetish makes a return.
I loved the "AJ followed me home, can we bang her?" line, it had me in stitches, as did the Author's note
The only little thing that niggled at my brain was that it was difficult to keep some of the changing positions visualized during the clop scene, a bit more detailed descriptions during the shifts of position would have been greatly appreciated.
3625101 Also, AJ doesn't feel that it is her place to impose on Twi and RD's already well established relationship (that to her knowledge just has her there for extra fun), and we just saw RD rationalize away her feelings for AJ.
Spike is being over welmed by the pussy in his home now ....he has to move into the cmc club house anyway great chapter i hope there will be more before christmas
I almost hate to say it, but I think the tl;dr's at the end of each chapter are the best part of the story. Don't get me wrong, the actual chapters are incredible, but the tl;dr's are the cherry on top.
3827835 Jake is technically not wrong. That said, "Futa" is short for Futanari, which is literally the Japanese word for a Hermaphrodite or Intersex person, i.e. someone with both sets of genetalia.
That said, on the internet Futa pretty much just means chicks with dicks, yes.
The tl:dr I wept at the sheer awesomeness and I could totally see that happening. 3623276 When I opened it in a new tab I though that Derpy and Fluffy were going at it. I really need to stop reading these but I won't.
Hm...
They starting to realize they love each other...
Well, at least Rainbow is. Should just come clean and say it, as I doubt Twilight would mind.
~Skeeter The Lurker
"You see this trophy here? I got it for my services as sex goddess to the crown"
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It lives! Great chapter here, and very intresting character development. The only question is does two realize it yet.
Ooh, the plot thickens further.
Best line in a clopfic ever. Nearly lost my mind laughing.
RE: Author's note -
Sweet ending. I was hoping AJ would have a slip of the tongue or just represent her element and blurt it out that she loves them. Turns out Rainbow Dash is falling for her. I think this is headed towards a happy threeway relationship, assuming Twilight consents. Looking forward to more.
So obviously next chapter has to have Twilight figure out she's staring to fall for AJ at the end, and then it'll just be a waiting game for who cracks under the pressure first. My guess is Twilight, being under pressure gives her issues.
That was a great chapter, as always.
By the end, though, I was nearly shouting through my computer screen at Rainbow Dash, "HOW THE FUCK ARE YOU NOT PASSED OUT FROM THAT BY NOW?!"
As usual amazing work, very hot and very beautifully done. So two out of three have realized or almost realized that they are growing feelings for the other. So I'm guessing Twilight is next. I have a very good feeling about what's gonna come up the next couple(hopefully!) of chapters. I can't wait!
Well looks like AJ and Dash are starting to feel more then just being sex buddies. Wonder if Twilight is starting to feel something or if she will still see the arrangement with AJ as nothing more then friends with benefits. I really hope if they try for and actual 3-way relationship they can make it work.
But great two chapters
And the emotional interplay grows more complicated....
....yessssssssss.
Once again, another great chapter, and my favorite fetish makes a return.
I loved the "AJ followed me home, can we bang her?" line, it had me in stitches, as did the Author's note
The only little thing that niggled at my brain was that it was difficult to keep some of the changing positions visualized during the clop scene, a bit more detailed descriptions during the shifts of position would have been greatly appreciated.
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Actually, I think it's going to be Twilight because of the antithesis of pressure. She's not going to see it AS an issue.
"So, can we keep AJ as something more. If that's okay with you of course."
"Well- but- This is your relationship."
"Well, yeah, and now it can be yours too. What's the problem?"
"I... it's just not what other ponies do!"
"Yes, the same could be said for you, Dash, and Applejack and I are doing that, too, anyway. I fail to see your argument."
"I... Buck it, I ain't gonna argue with her when she's like this. I sort of want her to be right anyway, sugarcube."
"Fine, if you two are going to be so, I dunno, chill about all this maybe I should just go and get fucked then... please?"
"Celebratory new relationship sex, Applejack?"
"Eeyup."
not gonna lie, as good of a chapter this was... I think I liked the author's note the most.
what's this? BATS, only alluding to sex scenes? i've never heard of such a thing!
also gdi rainbow dash why must the plot thicken so
The plot thickens!!!!!!
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One of the most awesome lines I ever read!
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Also, AJ doesn't feel that it is her place to impose on Twi and RD's already well established relationship (that to her knowledge just has her there for extra fun), and we just saw RD rationalize away her feelings for AJ.
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Your profile picture goes so well with that comment, it's not even funny.
Spike is being over welmed by the pussy in his home now
....he has to move into the cmc club house anyway great chapter i hope there will be more before christmas
I almost hate to say it, but I think the tl;dr's at the end of each chapter are the best part of the story. Don't get me wrong, the actual chapters are incredible, but the tl;dr's are the cherry on top.
As awesome as this story is, it wouldn't be nearly as entertaining without the author's notes.
3688093 It's an old tale (a.k.a. creepypasta) about a show called Candle Cove! Google it and you will understand!
hmmm my prediction for chapter 9 is Twilight realizes she might also be falling for AJ
What is Futa?
3827835 Jake is technically not wrong. That said, "Futa" is short for Futanari, which is literally the Japanese word for a Hermaphrodite or Intersex person, i.e. someone with both sets of genetalia.
That said, on the internet Futa pretty much just means chicks with dicks, yes.
hmmm will these three ever admit their true feelings for each other, or will somepony end up getting hurt in the end
The tl:dr I wept at the sheer awesomeness and I could totally see that happening.
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When I opened it in a new tab I though that Derpy and Fluffy were going at it. I really need to stop reading these but I won't.
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I busted a gut at that image.
Truly a line worth of remembrance.
Indeed, great work.