Every pony who had cause to walk by the library that afternoon heard the door trying to tear itself off its hinges and never looked at Twilight the same way again.

That author's note alone would have been enough reason to fave this story, as it stands though it's just a nice bonus to a well written opening chapter.

Also I love Dash's characterization here. Seriously Bats, you do her extraordinarily well in all of your stories, but between this, Spell-Bound Fireflies, and to a (slightly) lesser extent Coming Back, you have really hit your stride when writing her. You also do a really good job with Twilight as well.

That's probably the best author's note I've ever seen.

somewhere on the farm.

As if anypony but the Mane Six and maybe the Cutie Mark Crusaders ever has reason to go past the Library.

The story is of to a great start but there was just one thing that threw me off.
Dashie is fun to use as a petname, name in the bedroom or to embarrass/arouse Dash but when Twi calls Dash nothing else but Dashie it's just... Ugh... you know?

2923888 heh good choice

And I finally got around to reading this and I am SO not disappointed.

Also, I think I recall pre read a bit of that. Not much changed, it seems.

And if this is anything like the last time Peroth helped you... We're all in for a wild ride. I AM READY!

~Skeeter The Lurker

D'aw, I love how genuine the relationship feels here.

reads description, reads author name, reads first chapter........
this was hot, sweet, kinky, heartful, and adorable at the same time, just how do you manage to do that bats

and that author´s note at the end priceless

P.S. i think something happened because i swear i hit that follow button long time ago, i think... oh well if its the first time its a pleasure to follow you if its the second then a second pleasure now onwards to the second chapter, from the description it seems like a bit of drama could occur

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oh dear. if skeeter is ready, then I'm probably not.

AJ was the bottom of the barrel pick.

Assertive/dominating Twilight?

. . . y-you had to write the one thing, the one thing that would ever get me to read a Twidash clop!

Well played.

Twidash isn't usually my thing but this seemed believable , and heck adding some Applejack to the mix should make it epic.

Y'know it occurs to me... We haven't addressed this whole "Dash was just trying to shut Twi up" thing. What IS her deal? Maybe she literally doesn't have any actual sexual fantasies of her own? Or she's got some kind of freaky thing she doesn't want to admit to?

Either way this whole thing started with a smidge of dishonesty. That could be an issue.

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I think it's more that Dash was worried that Twilight would get mad at the thought of bringing another pony into their bed would be considered cheating on her, since that was the first thing Twilight reassured her of.

You say that like the library doesn't explode, get shielded, or become the epicenter for some magical mishap or other on a regular basis. Weird noises are probably one of the lesser events this week.

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Damn... As soon as you've got Spike reading clop about Twilight, you know you're doing something right.

Author's Note:
tl;dr
Every pony who had cause to walk by the library that afternoon heard the door trying to tear itself off its hinges and never looked at Twilight the same way again.

And that's how Equestria was made.
Maybe next time I'll tell you the story about how Twilight Sparkle and Rainbow Dash fucked each other silly in the middle of Golden Oaks Library. It's a doozie!

In all seriousness though, bats, you're a great writer. So many elements going into this story that as I Swype up this synopsis during my break at work, I dare not take the time to delve into my admiration for each component. Long story short, you convey everything really well, making it both believable and unbelievably beautiful. I will continue reading this as soon as I can. Good day to you, sir.

I just realized that I haven't actually read this yet. I was getting it mixed up with a different AJ Twi Dash trinogamy story, and I just had this one sitting in my Read Later pile.

Off to fix that.

I just went back and re-read this. I caught something that I missed the first time in chapter one. Twilight and Rainbow Dash have the same anniversary as me and my girlfriend. It made me smile.

The authors note is just perfect. Love this so far and I can't wait for AJ to be added to this.

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What's up?

Oh I like where this is going.

A lot.

Attention. Attention. My Applejack fanboy mode has been activated, and since AJ is best pony... I have one thing to say.

That is all.

BEST APPLEDASHLIGHT STORY EVER!!!

Nicely done.

eeyyuupp