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Punk Soldier from Outer Space

As the years have passed, music in Equestria has been nothing but a pleasant enjoyment, for relaxing and having a bit of fun. But few have ever thought of trying to get things a bit deeper in content. Will a human coming from another dimension change the fate of the pony land, and his?

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Darth Atrox

Darth Atrox #1 · Jul 6th, 2013 · · · Beginning ·

This is so stupid it's hilarious

KingOfVersailles712

KingOfVersailles712 #2 · Jul 6th, 2013 · · · Beginning ·

2830388 so... u laik?

Darth Atrox

Darth Atrox #3 · Jul 6th, 2013 · · · Beginning ·

2831116
Like I said: it's stupid but hilarious.

You should invest in a beta reader to seriously clean this story up. But the concept and delivery are hilarious. I got a good laugh out of it.

But, your amateurish writing will put a lot of people off.

KingOfVersailles712

KingOfVersailles712 #4 · Jul 6th, 2013 · · · Family ·

2831233 Thanks, this is my first story, and my english is still a bit rusty, since I've been living in Italy for 8 years. I widely appreciate advices!

Terrifying Space Worm