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She was an alicorn, It was expected she'd be prepared for everything. She was prepared for anything. Celestia however had still managed to trick her. Having received her envoys on numerous occasions, Britannia now had to contend with two of the more special 'guests' Celestia could have sent.. and figure out just what she thinks of Princess Twilight Sparkle and her companion, Discord. Was it possible Discord really had changed or was it just a fluke? and what about Princess Twilight Sparkle? Had she been just a lucky unicorn or was she truly deserving of the title of Alicorn Princess? My entry in the Buck 2013 Fanfic competition

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seems too short and to conclude too fast.

3101856
We had a wordlimit of 100 for the summary and 1000 for the actual story.

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Still feels like there should be more to the story than could fit with in the constraints of the contest

3103947 I agree, with the feedback I received I feel like I missed more the first time.
This is still the fic I wrote for BUCK .
The comments I have written in the Author's notes
I may revisit the story and try to do it better but it would be a separate chapter.

Anyway.. thanks for the feedback.:twilightsmile:

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