Set approximately six years from where the series is at now. The mane-6 have grown apart over the years and inexplicably, they find each other all together again. Is this the power of friendship at work, destiny or a darker force at play?
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This is just awesome! I'll be waiting on my toes just waiting for the next chapter to be uploaded!
Seems promising. Tracked. I'll hold with rating until more chapters.
can ponys live for sixty years?
also they got to have a family or somthing, they be like 60 with no kids, i wona see a lil'Rainbow dash
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I'm not sure where you got sixty years from... The time that progressed was only 6 years.
I estimated that all the characters from the show are about 17-19. So the characters in the fic are only in their mid-twenties.
>edited for derp
Interesting. And yet, of everyone, we seem to be missing the Keystone? Where lies the Element of Magic? Tell me, WHERE IS TWILIGHT SPARKLE?!
....Not sure the Flutterage one really works that well for it, but I think it's the best we've got right now.
Oooh, this I gotta keep reading.
And Dashie, AJ a mistake? Pah!
You know as well as I you won't be able to resist her~
*Ahem* Oh and the story's awesome so far by the way. *Sniffs* Excuse me....
223413 woops i read 60 for some reason
Wow just wow....i love this ..you sir are amazing....SOOO TRACKING (royal caps)....cant wait for more.
So glad I'm tracking this one. I love it. Two things, though. There are areas where you use the same word a lot. Like "door" or "towel". I only notice it because it's something I struggle with myself. The best tip I was ever given was to read my stuff out loud. It makes me slow down and catch things like that easier.
Also a little grammar thing. "I have no idea." Sally said as she stood up. That is incorrect.
"I have no idea," Sally said as she stood up. That is correct. You always want to go with a comma before the closing quotations if it's followed by a description or something like that.
Those two things aside, I LOVED this. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Thank you! I love feedback like this. I'm actually getting a third set of eyes to go over this again in Google Docs. After that, I'll be updating on here to fix those issues.
NINJA ATTACK POKE!
AAAAAAAAAAAAA *poke*
Hi! Long time no update
wow. This is the first story of this kind that I have read and enjoyed, and I really really love it! Plus it's got some Appledash, which never gets old. the relationships are carefully designed, and you've kept that characters very intact through this aging period. You're writing itself is nearly immaculate and I love your narrative style. I do hope you decide to continue writing this story, because it's going straight into my faves and I think it'll prove to be the best future story for MLP on the web, so it's a pretty major contribution to the brony community, honestly. Thank you! And please continue when you get the chance. I hope our reviews inspire you and that more readers will come in as the story grows length and continued support!
3/6/2013
Still no update?
Sorry but... deleting from my archive.
Unless, of course, you continue?
Adding to favorites just in case...
Interesting story that I've gladly added to my favs...are you going to update and continue...