Ships on a ship

by PonyXpress

Epilogue

As the night crept on, the moon slid across the sky, along side the stars. The boat sat in wait with the 6 friends, who had each discovered unpolished feelings for one another. The ponies had long since retired to their rooms to rest. Applejack and Rarity lay side by side. The orange earth pony's light snoring having no effect on the unicorn that huddled behind her, her arms draped over her earth pony companion. Twilight and Rainbow Dash lay curled up with one another. Their manes still a little damp from their late night swim. The blue pegasus' wings spread out and over the lavender unicorn, as thought to protect her from anyone or anything that might harm her. Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie cradled together showing no sign of separation. Pinkie's head resting firmly atop Fluttershy's, their tails still firmly entwined together.

The night was peaceful, quiet and serene. Each of the 3 couples slept without a bump in the night. The moon had run it's course and the sun was ready to take it's place. As that big flaming ball was light shone brightly across all of Equestria. Each of the ponies woke up heading for the back deck to see Ponyville slowly coming into view. The stunned looks on their faces at the sight of each of them coupled as they were, quickly turned to giggles of happiness.

The boat parked itself by the docks, as the boarding bridge was set in place. The ponies disembarked the boat with complete satisfaction. They each made their farewells and continued on with their regular days. The new found relationships quickly becoming a regular part of their day.

--------

Dear Princess Celestia

Relationships are strange and magical thing, even more so than friendship. Sometimes a friendship is already more than a friendship and just needs a little push to go further. Sometimes, relationships can bloom out of nowhere, when there previously existed very few feelings at all. Sometimes they can be formed though debates, what may seem like spiteful arguments and yelling, could actually evolve into something much, much greater. Sometimes, they don't always work out and it can be world shattering to hear so. However, I've found, the best way to decide if are pair of ponies share feelings for each other, is to give them free time alone. And even after the relationship has sparked, it takes time, effort and love to keep it healthy and strong.

Your Faithful Student

Twilight Sparkle

"Excellent! Luna!" Celestia grinned

"What is it now?" The dark blue alicorn groaned.

"I knew Twilight, liked that Rainbow pony, and it even seems she's learned that sometimes they need a push"

"What about the others?" Luna asked rather agitated with her big sisters antics.

"Oh they were just fortunate accidents, I had no idea they would pair up the way they did. Everything went better than expected" The regal white princess gave a cheesy grin.

Comments

[Bashfluff]

This is an excellent concept. The execution...lacking, to put it kindly. This needed a ton of work before it was submitted.

[OminousBrony]

Like the concept. Something much longer would been nice. But it gets the job it was meant to done.

[PonyXpress]

253433

Yeah I kinda did I rush everything the night before on this, I might run through it and give it the polish it evidently needs all over, but I dunno when I'll get the motivation to do so lol

[Cytotoxin]

i2.kym-cdn.com/entries/icons/original/000/001/253/everything_went_better_than_expected.jpg

[DreZoma]

Yo doug, I heard you like ships, so I put some ships on a ship in an ocean full of ships during a story about ships.

[moleman40k]

the flutterpie was the best bit

[pon3_dude312]

it was short, sweet, and to the point. a great quick read, well done, brohoof to you /)

[HiddenBrony23]

This was by far one of my favorite stories! Thank you kindly.

[Vera Veil]

a great read, and coming from the grimdark section its a nice change of pace ... and straight to the point and for that u earn one brohoof /)

if i had any thing i would like to critize about it would be the lacking content ... even if i am late with this ... (and im not talking about clop coz i hate that) what i mean is the chapters COULD of been more detailed ... but i guess it was enough for my liking i guess :D

any other comments i would love to add is nice choice of ships used on this ship ... what made u choose Rarijack, Twidash and Flutterpie anyways?

oh yea ... and Celestia is such a troll xD

[ShikimaAkemi]

Short, but adorable no less! I specially loved the Twidash one, and the epilogue.

I'm glad to see I'm not the only one that thinks that either Luna or Celestia would know about Twi and Dash's crush on each other and they would interfere just to "help to speed" their relationship lol