The Story starts out in the human world with two really good friends. One day one of the friends makes an incredible find that will change both his and his friend's lives forever. Galaxy will be portrayed as the main character in this story and Aurora will be another main character but not as focused on while going through the story. Galaxy is a pony with incredible powers and knowledge. He has the power to take energy from the sun and stars along with creating supernovas and black holes. The Aurora Borealllis has the power over the earth's magnetic field and ultimately controls the weather.
Chapters (4)
Nu.
What does Nu mean?
I would very much appreciate no negative comments on my story because I'm just an amateur writer and am not as good as other writers. I would also like people to look at my story with more of a free perspective than from a negative one. Otherwise if they are positive comments or ones of minor CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM than I will take them into consideration but if they are negative then I will not delete them but that doesn't mean I can't ignore them. So please enjoy the story.
I will just follow my friend Aurora Borealllis's advice and ignore the comments completely because he is having the same problem.
Completely ignoring all criticism and negative commentary is not how you get better at something. Ever.
2741797 People comment for a reason, it's to help you get better at writing. Btw i haven't read your story yet, but just your description will throw most people off. Anyways here is an Authors guide to writing: HERE enjoy.
Gary Stu, that is the only thing i can say to this chapter. Is that they are both Gary Stu's, which is not a good thing.
2737168 Agreed this chapter is a giant "No"
Ok i just read this, and i'm sorry but i was going to give it a chance. But your doing just about everything wrong with this fic.
Holy f**k. They are eating you up out here dude.
Oh f**k.
Yep. Friendship Is Not Magic here. It's the exact opposite.
Dude your fairing better then me i might as well keep pitching ideas to you aurora and shut down my account because of these a$shol&s
The OC is OP as fuck, it's boring to read theses kind of fantasy when the main protagonist don't struggle at anything and always have some kind of joker power to roll over any problem.
And you have the whole Human/Brony bullshit going on.
This BS don't had anything in the story, it just enforce the idea that this is just some self-insert wish-fulfillement story.
So scrap the whole Brony crap, and make the characters some ancient entity instead, it's way more plausible than a Brony turning OP as shit.
I understand that but this is my first story so if you can just bear with me until I finish this and after this story I will eliminate the human aspect to it and make it a completely different plot.
2742927I realize this and I am just starting out right now and I'm trying my best at these chapters and I will make a new story eliminating the human aspect part of this one. It will have a different plot than this one.
I can't believe things are going better in my perspective
Have no Idea why... What is it With me?!