An enemy who call themselves the Zargul have all but decimated earth making it unhospitable to any life form, be it man or cockroach. The humans had been fighting these aliens for five decades, hiding the location of their precious homeworld until the Zargul managed to find them. In a desperate attempt to save humanity thirty "arks" (spaceships designed to carry humans a long distance across many galaxies) were sent out and only three had managed to survive. The three arks were scattered and lost among the stars. These ships were called, "Hope's Dawn", "Shining Sentinal", and the ship where our story takes place... the "Leviathon"
-42 years later-
Our story starts off with a young man in his early twenties by the name of John Shepard. He was a sergeant in the space marines army or as we can now call them... the UPGF (The United People of the Galactic Federation)
They had all but lost hope on finding a planet where they could call home until they found a planet that could sustain them and provide for the families cramped up into the tight living spaces of the Leviathon. They later found it to be called "Equestria" This is their story...
Also... a blog about the latest story I will be working on... Through The Eyes of Innocence
Another blog about a one shotter comedy about Derpy. Link
(I hope you enjoy the story oh and here is the list of all the people who helped give me ideas:
"Lyrken"
"Regillespie94"
This is going to be a lot of chapters with about 3k to 6k words in each.
2565456 Thanks for the fav.
Heading off to a rough start... hope it gets better. I know I'm the creator and all but I do see potential in this at least becoming KNOWN. I hope you all enjoy the story. Prologues are generally not that large, as they are supposed to give you an idea of what the story will be about, and how it will play out.
Aleady 2k words on first chapter.
2566426 If it is not too much trouble if you are ever having a conversation with someone... a group etc.. It might help my views out if you maybe mention this story. Although it is up to you. and thanks for the favorite and the follow.
Many thanks,
-Brohoof-
Well this seems interesting and you seem to be doing a good job so far. The format and overall flow is good, though you did have some misshapes on spelling, but seems like it was just a typing error for example: "This seemed to calm it down and it slowly nut surely calmed down, letting him get ever so closer." nut surely, not sure why but I find that hilarious, but it should look like this "but surely." Anyways other then that your golden and I shall be waiting for next chapter.
2566528 I strive for perfection at all times, But these things do happen and I'm glad you caught it. 822 words on the 2nd chapter, so you won't be waiting for very long.
And thanks I've always wanted to be golden.
i haven't read this yet but if i am not mistaken... is that a picture of a space marine?
2567665 Yes! It is a picture of a space marine. I am not much in the way of drawing so I just googled space marine.
Congratulations! You won a
2568041 if i is not a warhammer crossover then please change it, it's kind of misleading
2571963 It is not and I cannot draw anything unless you want the art skill of an eight year old child.
Any space related soldiers on google will most definitely be related to a game. I really don't feel like looking all over the internet for one picture just because it is misleading.
I guess I could look it over but no promises as I have an EXTREMELY tight schedule.
2572001 i could help you with that, i'll link you a picture if i find a good one.
2572085 Thanks.
It is finally done! I hope you enjoy and please do not hesitate to throw in some constructive criticism my way.
the 2nd chapter comes out as i am reading the first and my like "asdgfgshgfhgjahsghsadjfhja!!!!"
5 min later
...i want moooooaaaaar ;A;
2583162 I feel flattered!
The third will come out either at the end of this week or the week after this weekend... This weekend I'm taking a break.
CLIFFHANGER!
Now I can barely wait for the next chapter! 
2585223 Although I bet you can guess who tackled John. And I'm glad you liked it.
2585640 Yeah, it's pretty obvious.
And you're welcome! 
Taking this weekend off from fimfic... So i'll see you when I get back!
also 1,750 word count on third chapter!
Yay! It's been updated!
2620271 Thanks for the favorite.
2621011 Unfortunately no...
Well hope you enjoyed.
100 views! I know it isn't much of an accomplishment, but it sure is for this story. I really hope it kicks off once I get into the 6th or 7th chapter. I don't expect this to be like 5k views or anything, but maybe 500 views. A guy can dream can't he?
And the Zargul will appear again... I know it isn't the most gory thing you've read but just you wait.
I won't be posting chapters until maybe thursday. MAYBE. This story is not as popular as my other one, "Applebloom's Great Idea" Have to work on the sequel, "Some Things Never Change"
Changing chapter 3 name... I really don't know what possesed me to pick that other one. Stupidity is probably a reason....
I'll get back to this once I complete "Some Things Never Change"
Have another story planned out. Actually two but I'll be doing the second one after I finish this.
I put this off long enough. I realize that I will not get done with, "Some Things Never Change" anytime soon so better get to writing a chapter on this. God, I feel like a dick for puttin' this off for so long.
Chapter 4: United Under One Banner is on its way guys and gals!
Word count so far: 230
It's here but it's short. It's really just to break the ice so I have something to go off of. I haven't worked on it for awhile and I didn't have a clue where to go with it.
What is that spaceship this fic's "cover art" from? It. Looks. AWESOME!
2909522 I got it from deviantart. Looked up spaceships...
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LEEEEEEERRRRRROOOOOOOYYYYY JENKKKKIIIINNNNSSSSS!!
Had to
2949784 Seems legit. I'm bringing in a character in this bonus chapter that I'm coming up with. He's sure to turn a few heads.
Do I detect a hint of space balls? At least it wasn't Ridiculous speed...
3032372 The flow of the story was broken when I went into hiatus. I felt that the only way to "Bring it back to life" was to add a little something extra. Sort of how Dr. Frankenstein would use lightning to revive the monster. It just needed a little push.
3032408 Or Star wars...
Hmmm. These evil invaders seem stupid. If they have ships the size of stars why would they send man (alien?) power down just to get dirty with the locals? If they want to kill all life in a planet just create a solar flare by disrupting the suns magnetic field tremendously in the right way. Or if they only want to kill humans, just create self replicating nano machines programmed to only kill humans. Could be built smaller than viruses if they are as advanced as you say. Anyways, this is my take on ALL alien invasion stories. I have yet to read/watch a realistic alien invasion story yet.
Oh and think of it this way; If you wanted to kill an ant colony, would you kill them one by one, or all at once?
3032450 It has a lot to do with their culture. They are bloodthirsty freaks that have a sick, perverted pleasure on inflicting pain on the weak. The ones that went down, went down because they wanted to die hurting others. That's what they feed on. And they will die over and over for just a taste of it. They volunteered. And the ones that stayed on the ship shot the projectile to destroy the planet (black hole). It has everything to do with their culture.
3032462 Thus the projectile that was shot in. At first, cities. And then the world. They wanted them to watch and suffer. They wanted to inflict as much pain as possible. Emotionally, mentally, and physically.
Don't you mean Equestria is at a tech tier 0.2? Because level 2 would be control of their solar system completely (I guess they have a magic level 2 though.) I'm using the Kardashev scale, if you are using a different one then please, correct me. Oh and humans are at about 0.6 so that's why I think you are using the Kardashev scale but just forgot the decimals.
3032546 I'm not familiar with this. It's an alternate universe so I'll just throw that "Over the boat" and act like nothing happened. But I thank you for bringing this to my attention. I'm using one I made myself, actually. No name as of yet but I'm sure later chapters might point it out. Who knows.
I think the Z something aliens are still tracking the humans and sense they stopped traveling at 'light speed' they might pinpoint their location, and in turn Equestria. All in all telling the princesses that an alien race with ships bigger than their planet is coming to destroy all life would be an pretty interesting reaction to read. If you stick to a grand scale of things I think this could be great! I wish I had the will to make my own space story... So many idea's that I have never seen in ANY SCFI story I have. Oh well, good story so far, hope it doesn't die as it seems like you are running out of drive to continue.
3032653 I have a lot of ideas. I just need to form them. Boy, I have my hands full.
3032476 True true. Well, after reading more of it what happened made sense, even though I would have done everything with nanites, (Did I mention nanites is the Anwser to everything?) Invading all humans on earth undetected and small enough to not be detected by the body, then ripping humans apart at the celluar level while making it so no one can do anything about it. I could explain the full plan, (would take a few thousand words to explain, I even have the ways the nanites replicate thought out.) but that would take to long.
Edit; Did I mention that it would be extremely painful? Breaking the flesh down atom by atom, baryon by Baryon, quark by quark. Making your atoms into any element they need to replicate themselves.
3032659 Well, I wish you luck with your story! Oh, and sorry if it feels like I have been spamming this story, I just have a lot to say today;)