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Pony Rock

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Cupzy

Cupzy #1 · Jun 15th, 2013 · · · Royally Pissed ·

All I've been doing is writing for the past 24 hours. Time to go finish Some Redemption

Ripely25

Ripely25 #2 · Jun 16th, 2013 · · · Royally Pissed ·

I for one liked the story and I am sad to see it put down

Remix

Remix #3 · Jun 18th, 2013 · · · A Very Bad Situation ·

Dude, it's rushed as hell.

ApplebloomOwnsCMC

ApplebloomOwnsCMC #4 · Jun 20th, 2013 · · · The Plot-Less Fifth Chapter ·

the comedy in this chapter was golden.

timothy2400

timothy2400 #5 · Jun 23rd, 2013 · · · Royally Pissed ·

K-Mart, cashier Fitzgerald Schlitz

OMG i lost it there i laughed my ass off for a solid minute ... Which wasn't really good considering was 1 am

I cant even finish it i keep dying from laughter

Dire Enigma

Dire Enigma #6 · Nov 20th, 2013 · · · A Very Bad Situation ·

I have to admit with Remix, It's Rushed. Not background, No detail... I can't read anymore then the first chapter without wanting to help rewrite it... Only if you want the help.

WildFire 24

WildFire 24 #7 · April 5th · · · Royally Pissed ·

I could not get further then the plot less 5th chapter I just did not like they know they were in a fanfic its completely different when they hear the narrator plus feels rushed a bit as well