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Antipathy

When tensions between Equestria and Aviatia, the homeland of the gryphons, escalate to violence, Princess Celestia sends Twilight Sparkle on a mission of diplomacy to try and ease the hostilities between the two races. However, when something happens to Twilight, her friends must embark on an expedition to save their friend and possibly even bring Equestria back from the brink of war.

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Key Lime Pie

Key Lime Pie #1 · Feb 13th, 2012 · · ·

I'm interested to see where this one is going. You have used well thought out vocabulary and the paragraphs are nicely spaced out also. Twilight and Celestia are also both acting in character. There's a good mix between dialogue, action and description which always makes for a good story.

Watching this one!