Peroth E...
Clopfic it looks like?
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You ask why, like the answer isn't staring you in the face.

I'm a bad influence.

The poor wall.

Read the description. My first thought:

"Uh oh..."

Will read later, sounds good!

This is what happens went love goes wrong....
Nice concept tho.....

I read a porn.
Huh.
:)

You wrote a porn but it's a good porn.

At least it's a good porn you wrote. I do like stories like this, where there's no drama or kinks or anything especially out there getting in the way of two ponies happily in love.

Also, Baton may be one of the most interesting original characters I've seen in a bit. It was an efficient setup of motives, personality, and, well, style. As a matter of fact... is she a canon pony I just don't know about?

Oh, this is only going to get funnier.

"The Prince Consort presents his compliments, and requests and requires that someone find a crowbar and some Polyfilla, leave them outside the Royal Bedroom and not under any circumstances ask why."

2614607 No. At least as far as I know. I created her specifically to serve as a little hook for Shining.

'Why?'

More like 'Why not?'

Definitely looking forward to seeing where this one goes. Your summary has me intrigued and your intro now has me hooked. Nothing better than a really good story that also has really sexy sex. Here's hoping you can continue to deliver on both counts.

--CG

You wrote porn....I see no problem with this!
Just don't let it take too much time away from Growing Pains...

2614855 I can combine them. Really make it about Growing Pains.

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You, sir, are a genius!

2614901 DashDashDashTwilightDashDashDash
Flutterdashlight
Rarijack
PinkieVega
FlutterBine
Twibineshy...

I could go on.

This is a story I never knew I've been waiting for.

Those usually turn out to be the best.

No problemo! Your porn is fine!

I'm just hoping Shining gets to rut the rookie silly by the end of this. I feel so dirty, but it's an accomplished kind of dirty.

nice and I cant wait to see what comes later.

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I cry every time.

The best kinds of clopfics are the ones that don't take themselves too seriously.

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I'm dying inside. ;-; Growing Pains was always on my Top 5.

Sees interesting looking mature fic in feature box. Sees it's Peroth E. Yep, this could go just about anywhere!

Pretty good start from what I'm seeing!

If this was any less awesome than it is then I would have said that you should have spent time working on Growing Pains.

But since it is awesome, and you are awesome, and Bats is awesome and the cover art is awesome... I suppose I can root for this story alongside what was one of my very first forays into fan fiction. Keep it up!

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Y'all are all acting like Growing Pains didn't update two weeks ago. Let the woman write some porn in peace!

And thanks muchly; the cover was fun to draw.

Poor Cadence, that had to hurt, and after such a good orgasm too. What a mood killer.

Why?
BECAUSE.

You did not write porn you wrote comedic gold that happened to be porn

Setting up a clopfic... with clop.

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Bloody brilliant.

From looking at your cover art, I am definitely hoping for a three way between Mac, Twilight, and Cadence.

You made a porn.
As to why? Because its fun.

I look forward to more.

nice

2613763 Indeed.

if any of what i've read of you stories (only growing pains) are anything to go by, this will be the greatest clopfic with a story ever.

Not only did you make it incredibly hot you also made it incredibly romantic. I never lost my suspension of disbelief for a second.

Best off all, this fic ain't over yet!

Hey, look, raw smut. This oughta be hilarious.

For the amusement? I'm entertained

So, let me get this straight...

Her muzzle went through the wall? As in 'knocked a hole in it'?

2621896 Yeah.

The four Fs.
Food.
Family.
Friends.
Fucking.
These are the keys to a happy life.

This is why you wrote a porn. You had to write it some time or else you'd be incomplete.

Dear Princess Mi Amore Cadenza and Prince Shinning Armour:

As your Master of the Cerimonies.it's my duty to remember you about the... bureaucratic needs of the Crystal Palace.
Yes, the Crystal Palace.
As in the mostly translucid Crystal Palace.
As in the transparent in some areas Crystal Palace.
As in the full of transparent walls Crystal Palace.
As in the freaking see-through Crystal Palace.

Thanks for your attention on the subject.
Your faithful
High Nose
Imperial Master of the Cerimonies

Ok, serious now, this tale is very entertaining. Good work on the story

I was amused and entertained greatly. One of the few pony porns that I actually found kind of hot. Excellent build up to credit for that. Good show, looking forward to where this is going.

Is that how she breaks her horn? Hahaha, I have to keep reading!

Am I the only one who reads clopfics like comedy? I don't know what it is but people attempting to write 'sexy' just makes me laugh, more so than any comedy here. Anyways this was hilarious, which means, to me, its good.

That ending was so funny!
I haven't laughed this hard since the guy in the wheel chair at the hospital told me he had aids!

That ending made me lol pretty fucking hard xD

2622872 Also the 3 "B's"
Beans
Bacon
Beer

Plus hunting and fishing.

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TSSSSSSHH OOOOOOOHHH!