War is brewing and a new group of ponies suddenly emerge once again. Outlawed and hated, Sven, or Kozak, must face his feelings and past to overcome the obstacles that lie ahead of him with his team. But what about the others? What if there's more going on than meets the eye? Fluttershy? Applejack? Rainbow Dash? Twilight? Rarity? Pinkie Pie? What will become of the Mane Six?
Shout out to Helloman892 for helping me proof read this! Thanks dude, probably would be a mess of horrible grammar (though it is still until I update xD) without you! :3
AN - I am well aware that my writing is horrible but I mostly do this during Bio Class anyway, what do you expect?
Chapters (20)
I love it! And what do you mean? You're writing is good! I'm really curious though about Sven/Kozak and what he'll do with Fluttershy! DON'T YOU HARM HER OR I'LL GIVE YOU THE STARE
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I'll keep that in mind :3
Are you still continuing?
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Yeah, currently working on the 9th chapter. Have my job and classes though but things are rolling smoothly still :3
Very enjoyable! Something easy to read whenever I just feel like I want to relax! Your writing is pretty good actually And I love reading the story, however there are a few grammar mistakes as expected. And now For the main question, when is the next chapter going to be posted? My sister and I are curious about Sven(Kozak, whatevs)
~ ZB
Oooh, exciting. You could use a proof-reader, but otherwise nice work!
Also, try not to kill Twi. Please?
~HM892
Edit: Also, I'd be glad to perform said proof-reading/editing. It's always nice to help.
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Thanks dude! Yeah, I know I need a proofreader xD. And I'll try to not kill Twilight.
Great chapter, Yuki. I'll get to proofing this as well some time soon.
~HM892
Ha, no worries dude. All for the good of Equestria, I say.
Nocte perducat ad victoriam.
That should become my signature.
~HM892
Fix the broken italics, I forgot that FiMFiction doesn't take well to text files.
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Yeah, I just noticed that too
Don't worry, man. I'm 120% sure that all the fans of this story (including me) will come back when this updates next. I know how hard your college work and such has hit your time budgeting, and I doubt anyone minds this long hiatus.
As an afterthought, could you pass along the next chapter when you've finished writing it? I've almost finished with the current project, and should be able to get chapter 19 done ASAP.
~HM892
........I don't feel I even need to tell you whats wrong here.
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Sorry about that, it's been a while since I've looked at this primarily with Finals and Junior year closing in College. I almost forgot I had this.