Nightmare Moon finds herself trapped on Earth, unable to communicate or touch anyone. Anyone that is, but a young man by the name of Jason. A young man, that she comes to love so much. A young man...that she would kill for to protect.
My good stallion, I am not usually one to shout, due to my extremely calm nature (you can point a 44. Magnum at my face and not get much of a reaction from me), but *engages Royal Canterlot Voice*SMEX!
P.S. Is it possible Miss Condron (did I spell that right?) is Celestia?
2601424 While that would be awesome, that is not the case. The next, and final prequel before Immortal Lovers is going to be a Luna story. Maybe in the future it could happen. Who knows.
2601503 That would be awesome. Assuming you want to write that. Though if you do, do it after you write Luna's story. You know, just in case what is suppose to be a small story turns into something bigger, like this one, and CBTM.
I always knew, that teacher was from FBI, but I never tough the government had a secret magic research. I bet there is where Sigrid and Roy sleep.
Oh and Jason has bathing in magic? Those that mean that he has, power, sweet I can't wait to see him go Nightmare in their assess. Also, if the next scene, will have some intimated hugging, I wonder if now Jason will be the one to be dominate, like he said he love to make his girl happy and something tell me, he is eager to take what is his by right the same way Nightmare took was is right by her.
Too many good stories in a single weekend! What is this madness? You're putting all my other favorite stories to shame. Love this story and 'Come back to Me', can't wait to read more in this little universe you've created!
At first i thought that nightmare was in heat that first part of the chapter, then i realized it was just you playing her as a seductress in that scene, well done btw. If that A/N is true then am i the only one here for the actually story and not the sex behind it? cause i like this plot and all (pervs, i know what went through your mind when i said plot >:() but if this is going to devolve into a sex story with hints of action instead of a action adventure romance story with hints of sex then im out of here. Also WE DEMAND THAT THEE GIVE TO US WHAT WE DESIRE, GIVE TO US THIS MOARRRRRRR!!!!!
I always wanted to see this side of nightmare moon so thank you very much for writing this story. I like your dialogue and the flow of the story is just right. Also you have just enough character description to guide the readers to an image but don't overpower them so they can still add a touch of their own imagination, which is a very difficult thing to do so kudos to you sir. Also I can't wait for the smexy part in the next chapter. keep up the good work Obligatory MOAR
Goddamnit, I can't keep up with all your stories with this rapid-fire updating, let alone every other story I'm following.
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Forth chapter has saucy shower scene. Get reading!
2601227 I just started reading chapter 2. Well, good thing I'm on sick leave.
2601240
You'll be fine, just get ready to build up that one handed skill tree.
I want da smex
Anyway, good work on this one man. Really enjoying this
OUT LOUDLY!
My good stallion, I am not usually one to shout, due to my extremely calm nature (you can point a 44. Magnum at my face and not get much of a reaction from me), but *engages Royal Canterlot Voice*SMEX!
P.S. Is it possible Miss Condron (did I spell that right?) is Celestia?
2601303
She is not Celestia
2601248 *face slam on desk* ...that ...that was ....just terrible...but...on another note...love the story!!
normally i dont really like pony in human world, but this is quite interresting. keep going
but seriously though, MOAR PLZ
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!
is your next story is going to be about chrysalis? because i would love that
2600640YA!! be sure to write it in all your story discriptions!
I'm curious about this now. How could anyone on Earth detect magic?
Guess I'll find out later.
I was expecting some cheesy sex scene but i actually liked it... why.jpg
I should not like this
2601424
While that would be awesome, that is not the case. The next, and final prequel before Immortal Lovers is going to be a Luna story.
Maybe in the future it could happen. Who knows.
Anyway, a very excellent steamy chapter.
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Cryssy will get some lovin in Immortal Lovers...
Perhaps I will write a little snippit before the main story kicks off, perhaps I will not
2601248 this is good even without the smex
2601503
That would be awesome. Assuming you want to write that.
Though if you do, do it after you write Luna's story. You know, just in case what is suppose to be a small story turns into something bigger, like this one, and CBTM.
I always knew, that teacher was from FBI, but I never tough the government had a secret magic research. I bet there is where Sigrid and Roy sleep.
Oh and Jason has bathing in magic? Those that mean that he has, power, sweet I can't wait to see him go Nightmare in their assess. Also, if the next scene, will have some intimated hugging, I wonder if now Jason will be the one to be dominate, like he said he love to make his girl happy and something tell me, he is eager to take what is his by right the same way Nightmare took was is right by her.
SECKS
NOW
Not sure if you're going to give Cadence a story before she married Shining...
SMEXYNESS!!! and Damn! I was right about NMM she's my kinda girl @w@ and I knew Jason liked being controlled ;D
2601503 chryssy?? Yes please!
Wow congrats on having every single story you written being featured here on fim
Ah the Government, always coming in and ruining people's time with the ponies.
MOAR!!! the SECKS is not a necessity, but it does add to the story.
I must say, you have a really good story going here...
Too many good stories in a single weekend! What is this madness? You're putting all my other favorite stories to shame. Love this story and 'Come back to Me', can't wait to read more in this little universe you've created!
MOOOAAAAAAAAAAR!
Will you be thy friend?
You do realize that "Thy" means "your"
So technically your saying Will you be Your friend.
MOAR
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Amazing story gives a new look at a dark character please please PLEASE continue to post new chapters absalutly amazing
At first i thought that nightmare was in heat that first part of the chapter, then i realized it was just you playing her as a seductress in that scene, well done btw.
If that A/N is true then am i the only one here for the actually story and not the sex behind it? cause i like this plot and all (pervs, i know what went through your mind when i said plot >:() but if this is going to devolve into a sex story with hints of action instead of a action adventure romance story with hints of sex then im out of here.
Also
WE DEMAND THAT THEE GIVE TO US WHAT WE DESIRE, GIVE TO US THIS MOARRRRRRR!!!!!
I always wanted to see this side of nightmare moon so thank you very much for writing this story. I like your dialogue and the flow of the story is just right. Also you have just enough character description to guide the readers to an image but don't overpower them so they can still add a touch of their own imagination, which is a very difficult thing to do so kudos to you sir. Also I can't wait for the smexy part in the next chapter. keep up the good work Obligatory MOAR
The author, take your time with development of a plot of the story. The image of your characters is still insufficiently developed.
I'm just here to ogle the picture...... that is all.
why do i want more so bad its so damn good
Was listening to this while reading. The title reminded me of this song
I just had smexxxx
And it felt so good!
2601248 I- uh... ummm... well... Next chapter please..?
2603463
Get in that corner and think about what you've done
This may sound crazy, but what if the teacher is Celestia..in human form in disguise??
It must be X-Com who detected them. Which means shit will go down...
SMEX,SMEX,SMEX!!!!!!!!!!!!
Is that loud enough?
Ah crap! The Foundation is onto you Jayson! Run fo yo life, before your designated as an SCP!
NOICE JUST NOICE! on to my next chapter!....actually i can wait till tomorrow
Time to run from secret agents, I'm glad they finally caught on now. I wonder this is going to be how they get to Equestria now.