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You're not the first to think so, but she isn't believe me :)

Oh $#!+ it on now!!

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these stories are just super duper cool, thought my account was playing tricks on me when it said i had an unread chapter for a book, well i'm just gonna go and... do something different while i wait for an update my hats go off to you sir *takes off my top hat* good day

Wow! I'm glad i woke up this morning.

Dude I have no idea how you put these out so quickly but well done!
You clearly enjoy your work.

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DUN DUN DUNNNNNNNNNNN

Only one thing comes to mind m.youtube.com/watch?v=w8A4CoKiAsc

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yay just yay

You sir really need to get another chapter out soon this is freaking gold. Gold bathed in platinum and handed to us on unobtainium plater with a side of awesome. Ok enough freaking out on my part. This is really well writen and the story is great. Keep it up my friend.

SHOUT! if you want the next chapter ASAP!!!!!

GET IT OUT NAOW PLEASE....

Outstanding! Needs Moar Nauw! (plz?)

Dis is da best luna/human story eva

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Nightmare Moon/Human, not Luna/Human

MOAR now about the chapter pretty badass at the end but I wonder if our goverment found someone with equal abilities in Jason here in our world would they be stupid enough to Fuck with him? Or would it be if you break the law you bet your ass well stop you but till then well simply keep an eye on you?

Well this story is quite interesting... how is moon gonna exit his mind after they eventually (if the do) go back to equestria.... will she be stuck there or will there be a way to unbind their mind?

H-He, he lost his mother? Men, that is heavy, no matter what his mother really love him, and because of the evils of men she die. And I suppose there is no spell that can bring back the death isn't it?

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A major point in Immortal Lovers will be "There is no spell in all of Equestria that can revive the dead."

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Even better

A truley exellent fic, i can also say that you are actully kinda true to NMM's personality.
I can fully see her as extremly possesive as well as jealous.

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She was born from jealousy and anger...so I took a chance and rolled with it being a part of her personality

The story is so good

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Tragic, and what about communicated? That way, Jason can at least said goodbye to his mother, and his mother can give a last treat to Nightmare saying that she better protect him

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Do you read my pre-made plans or something? Now i have to change it

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YES THAT'S QUITE LOUD ENOUGH!

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No wait! Don't do it, I said nothing, I know nothing, don't do it!

And to answer your question, Discord told me, its hard to tell what he mean sometimes, for a spirit of chaos and disharmony, he can be very zen and cryptic when you go to him for answers

Damn! Some crazy shit is going on here and I like it! Except his mother dying. That is just not cool.

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LOUD NOISES!!!

ooooooh, a point of high action?
don't you mean a 'climax'?
Oh, Trollestia.
Also, KILL THEM ALL JASON AND NIGHTMARE! KILL THEM AND SEND THEM TO HELL!

another chapter another excellent addition to this wonderfull story

Will You Be Thy Friend

Will You Be your Friend?

Should be "will you be mine friend"

BLOODY HELL!!!!

Ooooh. Iron Man moment.

ARE THEIR BODIES GONNA BE UNBOUND FROM EACH OTHER..... NIGHTMARE CANT STAY AS A SHADOW AND SHE!!>???

lolwut?

Btw extreme lols here
I opened this awhile back and had just now finished it. i noticed i havent left a like for you so i did. the number was 211, i clicked it and it escalated to 279 WIN!!!

Shoot at the glowing, talking pony that seemed to drag the sun out of the sky? Wow, guys... Your health insurance must be great.

2606065 lol same here i clicked the like button and it escalated to 283 from 279

MOAR!!!! NOW!!!!! Write it now!!!

holy shit i didn't think i will say it but that was a really good love(sex) part right there, this fanfic just gets better and better
btw i was listening to this trough the confession part

The only thing I wish for is for these unknown badguys to have a more detailed explanation beyond "Evil government people."

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Um, the links you put up didn't work.

The last parts of this chapter reminded me of this scene:

It's just too bad they couldn't save Jason's mother, I thought he would teleport her out of harm's way when they tried to use her as a bargaining chip.

you homo sapiens and your guns.

Another fun bit of reading.

my friend the last scene reminded me of this

JASON AND LUNA RULES

2826622 its nightmare moon, not Luna.