Nightmare Moon finds herself trapped on Earth, unable to communicate or touch anyone. Anyone that is, but a young man by the name of Jason. A young man, that she comes to love so much. A young man...that she would kill for to protect.
im not really confused, so much as wondering where they are right now... they went 2 thousand years in the past meaning...while celestia was waiting for chris to come back moony and jason where alive in the past...im more confused at the time swaps currently than anything else
You do realize that for this to be a "prequel" there MUST be a story already written for it to take place before. I not sure why you can't just call "Immortal Lovers" a sequel, because you know that's what it is.
2605546 There seems to be one made, called "Come Back to Me", and the last chapter showed someone (possibly jason, from this story) showing up in the middle of celestia's courtroom
oh well shit, I was expecting this to continue in the other story like that last part I read where the shadow walked out, I was wondering who that was that walked in.
It's... all connected? Bu- bu- but? I could see some similarities but...
HA HA!!!! I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU!!! YOU!!! YOU!! DID THIS!!! I KNEW THE STORY WOULD BE THE BEST WHEN I STARTED!! HA HA HA!!! AFTER ALL OF THAT READING!! I FOUND IT!!
HOLE-LY MR. FUCKEDY FUCK! YOU YOU YOU YOU YOU YOUYOU YOUYOUYOUYOYOUYUO AGHGHAGHAHGAHGGHAHGHAGA
I think you broke him... anyways. i will have to read the next chapter in his stead... pussy... Excuse me for a moment while i see if i cant wake him up. *twitch*
Daniel summers!!? Another expected character! And did the last 2 who got sent back to earth die then? The ex girlfriend and the bully cause there name wasn't listed o.O
Last chapter they're making sweet and tender love. Less than one thousand words later, they're joined together as a hellspawn abomination standing stop a mountain of tortured corpses.
... that's enough internet fanfic reading for one day...
Paths. Will. Merge. All. Is. Connected. Clash. Of. Destinies.
Oh my god! I've been keeping up with the other stories, including this one and reading the ending this chapter and the revelation following it, left my mind blown!
wow the portals name list was genius frankly another sneak peek if you will, at the past characters and the future ones. i do wonder what will Daniels role be, if he ended up in equestria of course. that was a nice plot revelation right there. this keep getting better and better not to mention your notes do nothing to calm me down since the finale is so HYPED UP!
shit.... This is something else man, much more epic than the entire Crystal Justice story. It almost feels as though your previous story was trying way too hard to be epic, where as you focused here Precisely on what makes the story interesting.
just one word can sum up what I feel and that word is, amazing... Not just one of my favourite stories, but it almost rivals "A dream of dawn"'s characterization of Nightmare Moon. Nay... It dwarfs it.
If you're going to connect all the stories, I'm expecting to see something really big.
I don't know how to feel about this... I am not a great fan of OP magic to be honest... I mean, they just changed the sky into a bloodmoon in the previous chapter and now they run into a secret military base and rofl-stomp every single human without breaking a sweat....
The way Jason & Nightmare Moon stage their attack on the AMA HQ following the death of Jason's mother reminds me of the final episode of Cowboy Bebop where Spike Spiegel attacked the headquarters of the Red Dragon syndicate after Julia was killed.
3403558 sit there and think about what you're saying for a few minutes cause OP is not an option in this chapter human / alicorn hybrid dude think about it for five minutes. endless possibilities!!!!!!!!!!!
2603879 No matter how many times I see this..... can't..... handle.... the..... CUTENESS!!!
im not really confused, so much as wondering where they are right now... they went 2 thousand years in the past meaning...while celestia was waiting for chris to come back moony and jason where alive in the past...im more confused at the time swaps currently than anything else
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All is explained in the next and final chapter :)
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I am sorry you do not like it
But everyone to their own Thanks for commenting
One messed up chapter but ending was boss.
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Messed up as in badass or messed up as in- Dude you should seriously rewrite this?
Great chapter looking forward to more
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The former man. Why would you need to rewrite that's just plain silly.
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Meh this chapter was always a 50/50 for me. I mean I was the one writing it and I was getting confused
lolol, transported to Equestria, yes, but the PAST Equestria. Can I say evil villan taking over the past?
So they end up in the past before going into the present. And those portals where because of the agency, that explain, what happen.
Interesting, there is only the Luna part and the grand finally.
Hmmm, I wonder who is this Daniel? Its looks like another girl besides the sister find a special someone.
That or Discord decided he wanted a protege. Oh that will be interesting, the disciple of chaos vs the princes's of Equestria.
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Daniel Summers- Dan from Come Back To Me, because everyone thinks I don't have plans for him
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I though you kill him
Sorry I mean: Did you kill Dan?
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No, nothing quite so simple >:)
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But Celestia said that she took care of him…oh boy, I wonder what she do to him. Also Sophie shouldn't be in that list as well?
I find this story veryi1170.photobucket.com/albums/r522/xSputnickx/tumblr_m1uhn0PXwP1r5wav0o1_250_zpsca8042f2.gif
Calling it: Jason will create a Stable Time Loop.
P.S.:
I wonder who would win if it came to Jason vs. Alma Wade or Jason vs. Primal!Kerrigan
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No...But spoilers. Can't say why XD
2605305
WHAT?!
This reminds me of Skullduggery Pleasant. Anyway, a fantastic story!
2605308 I mean that as a compliment
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Yay
2605464 No such Human in Equestria story exists that is better than yours. None.
Screw it all, I'm following you
2605471
Um wow , thanks for the compliment XD
2605474 It's not a compliment: It's the truth!
Ah love, it makes complete monsters out of the best of us.
You do realize that for this to be a "prequel" there MUST be a story already written for it to take place before. I not sure why you can't just call "Immortal Lovers" a sequel, because you know that's what it is.
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There seems to be one made, called "Come Back to Me", and the last chapter showed someone (possibly jason, from this story) showing up in the middle of celestia's courtroom
oh well shit, I was expecting this to continue in the other story like that last part I read where the shadow walked out, I was wondering who that was that walked in.
It's... all connected? Bu- bu- but? I could see some similarities but...
HA HA!!!! I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU!!! YOU!!! YOU!! DID THIS!!! I KNEW THE STORY WOULD BE THE BEST WHEN I STARTED!!
HA HA HA!!! AFTER ALL OF THAT READING!! I FOUND IT!!
YEEEEESSSS!!!!! All of it is connected. Now when i reread "comeback to me" I'll know who everybody is
*CACKLE CACKLE CACKLE*
HOLE-LY MR. FUCKEDY FUCK! YOU YOU YOU YOU YOU YOUYOU YOUYOUYOUYOYOUYUO AGHGHAGHAHGAHGGHAHGHAGA
I think you broke him... anyways. i will have to read the next chapter in his stead... pussy... Excuse me for a moment while i see if i cant wake him up.
*twitch*
2606890 I was freaking out when this happened. I think he meant for this to happen...
Daniel summers!!? Another expected character! And did the last 2 who got sent back to earth die then? The ex girlfriend and the bully cause there name wasn't listed o.O
Last chapter they're making sweet and tender love. Less than one thousand words later, they're joined together as a hellspawn abomination standing stop a mountain of tortured corpses.
... that's enough internet fanfic reading for one day...
Paths. Will. Merge.
All. Is. Connected.
Clash. Of. Destinies.
Oh my god! I've been keeping up with the other stories, including this one and reading the ending this chapter and the revelation following it, left my mind blown!
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I was thinking about that as well, these are all characters from his other stories right?
wow the portals name list was genius frankly another sneak peek if you will, at the past characters and the future ones. i do wonder what will Daniels role be, if he ended up in equestria of course. that was a nice plot revelation right there. this keep getting better and better not to mention your notes do nothing to calm me down since the finale is so HYPED UP!
I'll just leave it here.
shit.... This is something else man, much more epic than the entire Crystal Justice story.
It almost feels as though your previous story was trying way too hard to be epic, where as you focused here Precisely on what makes the story interesting.
just one word can sum up what I feel and that word is, amazing... Not just one of my favourite stories, but it almost rivals "A dream of dawn"'s characterization of Nightmare Moon.
Nay... It dwarfs it.
If you're going to connect all the stories, I'm expecting to see something really big.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7w8sMuEAxHA
2:06... that is all.
I really would like to see Luna's part in all this.
Blood, this is what i'm here for.
To their absolute horror however, the doors mutated into a large black swirl that quickly began to suck everything into it, crushing it instantly.
hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe
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I don't know how to feel about this...
I am not a great fan of OP magic to be honest... I mean, they just changed the sky into a bloodmoon in the previous chapter and now they run into a secret military base and rofl-stomp every single human without breaking a sweat....
The way Jason & Nightmare Moon stage their attack on the AMA HQ following the death of Jason's mother reminds me of the final episode of Cowboy Bebop where Spike Spiegel attacked the headquarters of the Red Dragon syndicate after Julia was killed.
I never got to read Luna's story. Did you even make one?
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yea. What's up with that?
He probably hasn't written it yet.
3403558 sit there and think about what you're saying for a few minutes cause OP is not an option in this chapter human / alicorn hybrid dude think about it for five minutes. endless possibilities!!!!!!!!!!!