When a new pony strolls into town through unconventional means, he is picked up by the relatively quite pony of the Mane 6; Fluttershy. Of course she helps him get to know with the town and its inhabitants but she begins to notice that something is definitively off with this new-comer as he seems irritated all the time. She hopes to help him as she does feels sorry for him but that will be hard as he doesn't seem to be listening to just her.
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Damn*
Dammit*
At least spell the title correctly.
My, my, my.
And me without my gifs...
Shame really...
All that besides, this isn't that great.
Lots of work needed to raise this from shit to enjoyable
I won't/can't review this, but I am sure someone else will be along soon and review it for you.
Word of advice, do what they recommend, please.
2584840
Thank you so much for that comment.
Hopefully next time you decided to berate a new story you will at least try to give some constructive criticism or just reason on why the story sucks instead of letting some else clean the mess up for you.
Feel free to come back any time.
2584840 Gotcha covered, bro.
2592865 Protip: That is not the way to handle such people. Do it again, but proper.
Try this as a test.
I say it's an interesting start. I await to read what happens next.
Plz... more