My interest has been peaked

mot bad but I still notice lack describing a mutude of things for ex the guards amour and Luna and Queen Helga but other wise I can see improvements and a word to the wise you may want to re due the begging because the only thing that gives you more thumbs down then blocky and solid story are a very shitty begging and you have adequate story flow but you may want to slow down a bit to improve the story and make ch longer unless you have enough free time to crack out ch like this every 2 weeks

Dude......Awesome.........when is next chapter because waiting really sucks

2603191I know how you feel and I'm already working on it.

2603222
soon? did pinkie hack your computer?

I have no computer just a kindle fire.2650541

2651226
lol

this story is good so could you... I don't know,
Update Already

Tactical 'Whaaa? Inbound! Its all over!

2715956 agreed, and also, I was wondering...
OY! AUTHOR! WHAT ABOUT THE OC I GAVE YOU!

2923695
honestly its been so long since there has been an update that I forgot about this story entirely so thanks for commenting on my comment and reminding me of this story but seeing that there is still no update i'll probably forget again

2923695 sorry been busy with packing for the air force.

2937479
your in the air force?
now its pretty obvious why this story had no updates

2937479 GOOD LUCK DUDE I SALUTE YOU..... ps fucken update already

I wonder what was under that blanket?

hope this story isn't dead and that you'll add some more chapters soon

Write moar

Update please?

When's the update coming up

When's the update coming up

Pérdida de tiempo.