Then I don't care to tell you why this premise is overused.

dat grammar

I...I don't know what to say.

hmmmm lets see were this is going

The title sounds like teenager that thinks he's a satanist because life Isn't what he thought it would be.

2553395 your half right on that.

2553577 A nice shitfic to settle on... THANKS DUDE

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2553231
Your user name matches that perfectly.

2553896
Umm, thanks I guess?

no offence dude but you need to work on this man for starters you rushed into not even giving us a good description of the chatater and you shift from 1st to 3rd person view every other sentence at times so if anything you have a semi decent fondashen for a story but needs work let me now if ya neede a bta I know a guy

Eh, needs a little work. Or a lot of work

~SWAG

"You see I was looking for a way to leave the universe I'm currently in, but I need a being that is as chaotic as myself to do so."

Discord you're already in a cave outside of Equestria goddamn

2554347

2555409 how is that funny

2555435
You're telling this guy to improve his writing. It's completely fine, however, your own writing sucks, dude. In terms of grammar and stuff. Don't mean to sound like a dick, or anything. It's just funny.

2555479 fair enough dude I am just trying to help man and I don't see you offering any constructive criticism

2555494
My only advice to the author at this point - take this abomination down before Prince Solstice finds it.
Another wangsty teen in Equestria, seriously. From the very beginning he tells us that he DOESN'T CARE. If he doesn't, then why should I?

Celestia is running out of burial territory for wangsty teenagers, red and black alicorns and U.S marines. She'll have to build a crematorium if this keeps up.

Glad to know you don't care. Saves me the trouble of having to actually read your story.

2555511 from my perspective it is his choice and dude I agree with you their are a few to many of those story but the problem isn't how many are just how much work is put into it which in some case is much but their are diamonds in this here coal mine

I might be a wangsty teenager my self but honestly? I feel that there are more stupid ass bronies going to equestria desperate virgin fanfics then there are actually back storied wangtsy teenagers who don't give a fuck, land in griffonia or wherever the fuck and immediately fuck dj pon3 or something like that. seriously at least he is original and didnt fucking wake up in a forest with rainbow dash just chillin in the sky fuck that.

after looking over this I think I said the f word to many times.... maybe I was offended?