This week the latest 45 minute long advertisement for brushable horse toys (and horse toy accessories) was released on Netflix. Thanks to fandom, I was able to watch it too. This episode is in "chapter 3". It looks like this will turn out to be the only episode in "chapter 3".
Alright comic, 3rd of the 4 issues. Time to sink or swim.
Because it comes up a lot in the writing-help rooms on Discord, here's how to easily share your writing to get feedback without having to muck about with user-specific permissions.
1. Create a Google Doc that has the writing you want critiqued in it.
2. At the top right of the document's edit screen, click the Share button:
3. Click Advanced:
Hey, everyone. I know I've been extremely absent from this and I'm sorry for that, but after making some choices on which villain to critique next, I've decided that first and second choices will be done on possibly the same day since they're from the same medium. Again, sorry for taking so long.
Anyway, let's go over the rules:
Luna. One true princess of the night, candidate for best pony, unquestioned best princess. She of the abacusshipping, the moonbutt, and the dreamwalking.
Discord. Lord of Chaos, recurring guest voice actor, fountain of fan speculation. Counts Kefka and Sheogorath among his peers. He of the mysterious past, the reality warping, and the pop-cultural references.
They come together to give us a comic.
Okay, god… that was a pleasant break from that. So, where were we?
In our last episode, Rarity wasn’t Rarity and everypony was an idiot. Death happened, and death happened, and then death happened some more. The author simply copypasted the show into the fic, then used a tired cliche twice. And then death happened again and Twilight forgot about it.
I am a writer. I adore criticism and creative improvement, and when I hear back from my readers I rejoice! Whether it is positive praise or critical evaluation, hearing from you is always a potentially eye-opening affair that I always look forward to. Now, the voting system in Fimfiction is not super helpful to that ideal in itself. I would love to know what you think about my writing. I want to know what you think, whether its praise or condemnation. I see all the up-votes on a story and
For a breakdown of the format, don't forget to check the first entry.
Title: Of Angels
Author: PaulAsaran
Short summary: Angel Bunny learns to write from Twilight, for a reason that quickly becomes obvious. Told through letters/written conversations.
For today’s critique, I thought I would try something different. Rather than reading a new story, I took a story I had previously “reviewed” (by leaving a comment on it), and then rework that comment into a proper critique.
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