Edward keeps Bella busy on the island for days, with things like snorkeling and hiking and birdwatching, and she’s tired a lot. One night, Bella suggests waiting a little more for her to be turned; she wants to try out Dartmouth a bit, stay human for longer than she’d expected. Why? So she and Edward can bang some more. Hate hate hate.
Some authors just don’t grasp the concept of “unedited”.
It’s morning. Jacob and Seth have been patrolling off and on throughout the night, one of them sleeping while the other runs. Jacob’s wrenched from his fitful sleep by Seth’s howling; Leah’s also joined their pack. For some reason, Jacob and Seth both act like this is a bad thing.
We don’t get to see Bella and Jacob throw down, which might’ve been impressive. We don’t even get to see them get pulled apart. We cut to after the incident, where Edward and Seth have already intervened and stopped Bella, although Bella broke Seth’s arm. Edward praises her for keeping control over herself for as long as she did. Shut up with the amazing control part. I don’t care if it’s true, I’m tired of hearing it. Bella tries to calm herself down from her spat by thinking over some
Evening lads, I was hoping if anyone could give me their thoughts on this art piece I commissioned that was made by JodTheCod, here's the link to the original thread if you're interested.
I heard the cool kids around the block like a little buggo in their lives? Well, if you guys come back in the morning pacific time, I might just be able to offer something that might interest ya...
Oh boy i heard that fim is going to be on its last season well interesting and of course when i grow the balls to start commissions heh well is there other fandoms you guys think i should write for?
Bella’s and Edward’s honeymoon takes them to Brazil; specifically, Rio de Janeiro. They head to the ocean docks on the western edge of the city. The ocean on the western edge of a city in Brazil. Really:
The taxi continued through the swarming crowds until they thinned somewhat, and we appeared to be nearing the extreme western edge of the city, heading into the ocean.
Yes Sweetie Belle Alone updated and I’m still iffy about the chapter but oh well!
It’s not easy chapter coming soonish?!
.....I missed my own anniversary. I have now been on FIMfiction for a year and I've grown a lot as an author in such a short time. Hot damn.
Also, this is Marcbot2004. I just went through a small name change in spirit of Halloween and a new show I started watching.
So I've wandered off to Space engineers once more, and once more it's sucked me in. I'll be getting back to Sub soon, as I've had a few ideas and now know how to get over the latest hump, but let me learn you guys some things...
THINGS I'VE LEARNED ABOUT BUILDING SPACE SHIPS ON PLANETS:
1:unlike in space, if you don't lock it down, the ship will tip over while you're building it, leaving you angry and frustrated.
Yep I have no will it seems to continue for now. In the future? I don't know.
Going to write the chapter, yay!
>Suddenly, illness.
Darn it. Okay, maybe when I get better.
>Suddenly, grandpa dies.
Uh... okay... maybe after the funeral.
>Suddenly, friend gets back from a few years being gone
. . .
One day, dear readers! One day!
So. Last book. Here we go.
Clinginess Meter: 0
I hate hate hate hate hate these prefaces. How not to do prologues. Skipping.
The moment Bella wakes up, she realizes she can everything much more clearly than she could as a human. Everything’s sharply-defined and she can notice things that were too small before. It’s an interesting idea, but like many interesting ideas in this series, it’s botched. Like in this description:
Hey, guys.
Raptormon132 here. Just wanted to give the brief news that I've started a new Yu-Gi-Oh! based group. The group is called "Hero and Raptor's Yugioh Decks" Anyone who's into Yu-Gi-Oh! and the Trading Card Game are welcome to join.
Link to the group: https://www.fimfiction.net/group/212701/hero-and-raptors-yugioh-decks
It took almost a month but the next chapter is out now for everyone to see but I don't feel confident about it. technically I had it ready about two weeks ago but every time I was checking it for any error I didn't like it and had to erase some stuff and add other over and over and over again that by the end I don't know if the writing flows correctly. I am sure it should be fine, Right?
Good thing I’ve got a strong Bullshit Sensor (or so I hope…).
The hunt begins with a halfway-decent character scene where Bella’s nervous about jumping out the second-story window even though she knows she’s indestructible now. But then it’s ruined when she tries it and does it perfectly.
“That was quite graceful — even for a vampire.”
BECAUSE WE CAN’T INCONVENIENCE OUR PROTAGONIST. NO. SIR.
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