MLP: Hard Analysis & Criticism
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Rants/show criticism/how it should have been

For stories that directly or indirectly criticise the show, tales of how it should have been or good old-fashioned rants.

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TWhat You Deserve
MLP: FiM
Equestria Girls
Drama
Slice of Life
Cozy Glow is saved from sharing the same fate as Chrysalis and Tirek due to the intervention of Sunset Shimmer.
Sunset Shimmer
Cozy Glow
DarkHooves · 5.3k words · 44 11 · 1.9k views
TA Discussion on the Benefits of Murdering Small Children
MLP: FiM
Slice of Life
Some time after Twilight's coronation, she and Starlight have a conversation.
Twilight
Starlight Glimmer
Codex Ex Equus · 1.7k words · 145 65 · 4.9k views
TAJ, Rarity, and Fluttershy Complain About Their Minimal Role in the Movie
MLP: FiM
Comedy
Tragedy
Dear Princess Celestia: We didn't get to do anythin'! No solo songs, no important scenes, nothin'!
Alt. Universe
Fluttershy
Applejack
Rarity
Main 6
CartsBeforeHorses · 1.2k words · 43 7 · 1.4k views
TReturn of Humanity
MLP: FiM
Romance
Dark
Comedy
Slice of Life
Tragedy
Sequel to The Lost Element. 3 years after the first human in centuries set foot on Equestrian soil, the time has come for the next step to be taken. Will the next step to humanity's return be smooth, or will history repeat?
Gore
Human
Celestia
OC
Nightmare Moon
Main 6
Chrysalis
Humanity · 4.8k words · 87 52 · 565 views
EShe Said No
MLP: FiM
Slice of Life
Another disaster has struck Equestria, and Princess Celestia sends for the Elements of Harmony to band together once more. She gets a response she never expected from her former student: No.
Alt. Universe
Twilight
Celestia
Kodeake · 3.7k words · 750 230 · 11k views
TTake Two
MLP: FiM
Dark
Comedy
Slice of Life
A much older, arguably wiser, somewhat darker and definitely crazier Twilight Sparkle switches minds with her younger self to FIX EVERYTHING that went wrong before
Spike
Celestia
Main 6
LordBrony2040 · 120k words · 2,059 94 · 27k views
ETwilight the Radiant
MLP: FiM
If things had happened differently...
Alt. Universe
Celestia
Derpy
Doctor Whooves
Main 6
PonyTom · 3.2k words · 85 3 · 2.6k views

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