This was awesome.

Not enough gore for a fave, but you still get a like.

it shall be more yes

>>Salted Pingas
Yeah, I kind of forgot that I split it into two parts. part two will have more gore.
A lot more gore.

>>Shadow of the Night
Why thank you

>>Manes
Yes, definitely.

At times, I think your computers autocorrect fucked up, cause it seems like there are random words in place of the names of characters.

I like how you seemed to start off with this being at least partially serious, then seemed to throw that out when you had the pegasus acknowledge their lack of sympathy for ENSLAVING THEIR OWN CHILDREN.

I don't understand why fanfic authors seem to have such low opinions of the Mane 6. They all assume that Dash would hurt her surrogate younger sister because of the job she(Dash) has, or that Twilight would kill Fluttershy simply because she(Twilight) ran out of parchment, or something. You'd think that, what with all the episodes devoted to enhancing their characterization, we'd realize that the ponies AREN'T complete assholes with hearts darker than the bottom of the ocean.

The thing I like in story's or something like this is when the tornado machine exploded. But what none of the story's i have ever read have done would be that the main charictor would be thrown into something or somewhere. It would be so cool if someone would describe being thrown through the wall by an explosion and hitting many different things or pony's. Just freaken simply bouncing off of stuff.

>> Omnifire
Oooooh, I should do that. Like big bloody splatters all over the wall, a few foal slowly sliding down leaving a bloody trail as it falls...
Yes.

This apaul's me! But I like it! It's like that movie Sharknado you humans talk so much about!

3254239
Thank you dearest I've never seen sharknado...

3251895
This made my day.

3255994 it's about a tornado full of sharks

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Well I would assume.

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