The Cutie Mark Crusaders venture out in the middle of the night, but their usual "crusading" is not on their agenda.
This story was intended to be a single-chapter shot, but I sorta scrapped it. Maybe if someone asks for more will I come up with something else. Yeah, this is my first story, so be nice.
Pretty good! I think you're being too hard on yourself. It doesn't have much of a plotline, but I guess that's why there's a "random" tag. All in all, it was pretty good.
I really do like the story so far. I would love to see more. Have you thought about trying to include something about them discovering something (other than the two ponies) that night? Just a thought.
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I did have ideas awhile ago, but they were pretty much all in my head. I actually wrote this months ago and actually decided to submit it as it was today...problem is, I have trouble writing because I don't do it much, even if I'm okay at it. I'm also never satisfied with word choice relating to my plotline. I guess if I get more than 20 thumbs up I'll continue.
What are you talking about? There are far worse stories on this website.