World’s greatest teacher, Royal Protector, Immortal. All of these are titles to a man known simply as J. One night, he and his current student were pulled into Equestria. There, he makes a name for himself, serving under Equestria's royalty. When an entity that's threatened Equestria since its beginning appears, will J protect Equestria or will he fail to uphold his title.
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cool!
some grammar errors dude but the story overall is great keep it up, you got me intrigued
cant wait for the next update! J is pretty cool its a nice original story, hope you finish it :D
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Thanks!
And don't worry, I will not give up on this story.
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awesome then! this has so much potential cant wait ! best of luck out there!
Instead of the forest path, they were met with a thick patch of fog that seemed to in gulf the whole forest.
I think you mean engulf.
“J is that you.” he heard from the crater.
You need a question mark.
come one out so we can find out where we are.”
Come on out.
She then made contact with the water and not ever two seconds later she resurfaced.
Even.
helped her out of the stream. She stood close to J and shook like a dog to get the water out of her coat. It seemed to work because most of it seemed to leave her body and land on mine as I realized how cold the water actually was.
You seemed to switch from third person to first person here.
or extremely painfully for the one on the wrong side of Isabel's wrath.
extremely painful. the -ly does not fit here.
Since Isabel was not use to her new body,
used.
You didn't have to use the elements of Chrysalis and she herself trapped Celestia.”
The elements of Chrysalis. God help us.
“I have many titles.” Said J, “There not important right now.”
They're
i see you changed the picture. love the new picture J looks like a badass. about to read ch 4 :D
nice so far. i few errors where you place He when you mean The. love it though.
I hope you continue this story I think it is very good
noooooooo its on hiatus!
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No need to worry, It's not on hiatus forever. I actually have the story done, I'm just trying to finish up a few things before I post the other chapters.
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omg good to hear man ive seen many stories i like go on hiatus for long long times and sometimes even get cancelled good to her its doing alright
i cant wait to read some more been waiting forever for an update!
thanks for letting me know though
when is it going to be done it to good