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The Veiled Elite

In which Rarity finds herself a pawn in a game of lust, lies, and vengeance. The life of the Canterlot elite isn't as sweet as it had once seemed.

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Impress Me #1 · Mar 8th, 2013 · · ·

Hmmmm. I don't know. Review or no review?

xDan

xDan #2 · Mar 8th, 2013 · · ·

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Unsolicited reviews are generally frowned upon by Fimfiction's userbase. Were you here for The Purge?

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Impress Me #3 · Mar 8th, 2013 · · ·

2232038 I just read it. I never do one WITHOUT the author's consent. And I usually offer two types of reviews. The asshole reivew (A review with a few biased points) or the happy fun time review (Strictly unbiased with that fish guy from spongebob yelling chocolate at the end.)

xDan

xDan #4 · Mar 8th, 2013 · · ·

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Knowing the awful, awful userbase of Fimfiction, you should ask everyone and their mothers if it's okay to say that someone's story has a flaw.
Sarcasm aside, assholish reviews have long since died out and will only get you negative attention from the shitty authors.

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