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Who is the Loneliest of All?

“Mirror, mirror on the wall? Who is the loneliest of all..?” Twilight whispered. I am the loneliest of all. Twilight thought to herself.

The time is set, years into the future. Princess Twilight is an immortal alicorn. Unfortunately for her, her friends have long since passed away. When she is alone, she is overwhelmed by feelings of depression and loneliness. Will she overcome these negative emotions or will they consume her mental well being?

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Wolf Counsler

Wolf Counsler #1 · Feb 18th, 2013 · · ·

Bravo! Bravo! One thing though, whenever a new character speaks, it begins a new paragraph.
Twilight
Spike
Twilight
But great otherwise

SweetMelody

SweetMelody #2 · Feb 18th, 2013 · · ·

I just agree with Wolf Counsler, but other then that great story.
P.s. maybe you can read my story "My Day in Ponyville"

Mazamba

Mazamba #3 · Feb 19th, 2013 · · ·

Am I the only one that noticed the change in Twilight's cutie mark?! One more star people!

Mazamba

Mazamba #4 · Feb 19th, 2013 · · ·

Listened while reading

Alexander Bolt

Alexander Bolt #5 · Feb 25th, 2013 · · ·

Hm. I don't condone the use of Rwby here, as the story could use a differently put point, but nevertheless you achieve what you wanted to. I'll stay neutral on this one.

Wurd