Somewhat laughable scenes will pop up and I said that I was going to write a messed up story so here it is enjoy. Don't take it seriously though it is a purely random fic.
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One: Don't tell people it's a self insert, (almost) no one likes them.
Two: Don't put WW2 in the title. Take the damn time to write out World War Two, also, capitalize any major words in the title i.e.
That's pretty much all I can offer without actually reading the story.
nope
2142871
oic wut u did there
EDIT: The original comment was "What Just Happened."
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Thanks for the input.
I didn't have anybody re-read after I wrote it so I would like it if you message me back about what I did wrong. For future reference or if I get the time to go back and edit it.
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Lack of proper format / grammar, poorly written, self-insert.
Am I the only one who thinks this story is actually half-decent? Get an editor. It'll make it 50% better.
was the Old Spice guy a pony?
4918264 nope he is to awsome for that.
3640397 thank you.
2146505 I wrote it in 30 min for an English paper.